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formely_i_luv_avrils_ bois
07-30-2003, 11:16 AM
Ok here's the thing i got really bored and i wanted to write a new story so i figured i would make a sequal to my story Crushed. If any of you want to read the first story cause you havn't read it it's in Creative Writing.
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Ch 1

After Michelle finished telling Evan the story he said, "That's funny. You thought we wouldn't care and you had us cha cha out of the building?" Evan started to laugh really hard.

"It's not funny!" Michelle hollered, but she started laughing to. "Alright i give up."

"I was in your dream?" Evan asked.

"Well ya, but it's not like i intentally put you in it." Michelle said.

"So you have to go kiss Jesse?" Evan asked.

"No i don't! I'm not having my dream happen for real!"

"Who has to kiss me?" Jesse asked. As he walked in.

"Michelle does." Evan said. Michelle hit Evan upside the head. "Ow."

"No i don't." Michelle said.

"Yes you do." Avril said as she walked in.

"No!"Michelle said.

"Yes." Avril told her.

"No."

"Yes."

"No."

"Yes," Jesse said.

Michelle looked at him. "What do you mean yes?"

"Yes i want you to give me a kiss."

"No i won't."

"You might as well cause i know you like me."

"How do you know." Said Michelle very angerly.

"You shouldn't leave your diary out in the open," he said. Holding it up.

"It wasn't out in the open. It was in MY room and locked."

"Well the lock is broken."

"I'm going to kill you!" Michelle ran after him.

Avril just started laughing. She sat next to Evan. "That's funny."

"I know." Evan said.

"Ahhh, please don't hurt me!" Jesse hollered from the kitchen. "Ow, ow,ow,ow,ow. Stop i'm sorry." Jesse managed to get away and walked into the living room with a black eye. "I don't like her." he said.

Avril started laughing again. "You sound like the guy form the starting line that said 'I don't like you'".

Michelle walked into the living room holding her diary. "I am never keeping another diary ever!" She threw it into the fire.

MorningStar
07-30-2003, 11:17 AM
aww i loved it lol its so good

Artemis
07-30-2003, 11:17 AM
lmao!! please write another chapter soon!

formely_i_luv_avrils_ bois
07-30-2003, 11:19 AM
ok i'll try but i was going to write a chapter for Beginning

Elaine
07-30-2003, 11:19 AM
more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dee
07-30-2003, 03:33 PM
Who's this fic about? I haven't read the first fic. Any special couples or so?
I read this chapter and it was good.

formely_i_luv_avrils_ bois
07-30-2003, 03:40 PM
if you go to creative writing and look up crushed you can read the first story

Artemis
08-02-2003, 11:17 AM
whens the next chapter?

formely_i_luv_avrils_ bois
08-02-2003, 11:19 AM
i don't know i don't like you anymore so whenever i feel like it!

formely_i_luv_avrils_ bois
02-27-2004, 12:10 PM
avriljunkie i was joking i do like you lol any way to all of those who have read the first one and has started this one i am finally going to post more i apologize for me not writing in a long time but i have had really bad writer's block and i feel bad because you guys liked my story so here we go and enjoy the show.....lol

formely_i_luv_avrils_ bois
02-27-2004, 12:26 PM
Ch 2

~That night Michelle's pov~

Avril and I were sitting in my room talking. "I can't believe he read my diary. It's the most private thing i have!"

"Well i have something to tell you." Avril said.

"What?"

"Jesse likes you!"

"Your kidding!"

"No he told me a long time ago. He's just trying to cover it up."

"Then why doesn't he ask me out or something?"

"He was afraid you'd turn him down!"

"But now he knows, so why doesn't he ask."

"He's scared of you!"

I gave a little laugh. "Your kidding right?"

"No. You should go ask him out."

"I can't do that!"

"Yes you...."before she could finish her sentance the phone rang.

"Hello." I said as i picked up the phone.

"Michelle it's Jesse can you put av on?" His words were slurring together.

"Yeah sure. Av its Jesse i think he's drunk." Av picked up the phone. I could only hear her side of the convo.

"YOU'RE WHERE!" she hollered. After a few seconds i heard her say "Yeah i'll come get you. I'll be there in 30 minutes." She turned to me. "I have to go pick up Jess i'll be back in a little while." Avril got up and left.

~Avril's POV~

I got to the police station and picked up Jesse. "Thanks Av." he said. "I appriciate it." His words seemed to slur more and more as he talked.

"I can't belive this. Why would you do something so stupid."

"He started it." He said sounding like a little kid." We argued for the half hour it took us to get home. As soon as he got in he ran to the bathroom. My guess was he had to go empy his stomache. Yep i was right. He walked out a few seconds later. He has more on his shirt than he probably did in the toilet. Michelle came down the stares.

"What's going on? Where did you have to go pick Jesse up at?"

"I'll telll you later." Jesse walked back into the living room with a different shirt on.

"Hey Michelle what's up?" He walked over to her and pulled her in for a kiss. Michelle pulled away.

"What are you doing!" She hollored.

"Aw come on just one kiss. You know you want to."

"Not when your like this." They argued for a while and then Michelle stormed of to her room. I heard the door slam. I just went to my room and went to sleep.
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so what ya think? is it dumb or good. if you like it tell me to keep going.

ninny_23
02-27-2004, 03:15 PM
its good its just been a while

formely_i_luv_avrils_ bois
02-27-2004, 03:53 PM
i know and i apologize a million times for it!

punkaliciousk8tr
02-27-2004, 04:15 PM
haahaha great story this one has made me laugh I like it! plz post more!

AvrilandEvan22
02-27-2004, 07:59 PM
Awesome!! Can't wait to see what happens

formely_i_luv_avrils_ bois
03-01-2004, 09:59 AM
hey i hateto do this but uh i can't write for a while i have some issues right know if you want to know what you can pm me but yeah srry