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vatjui
09-15-2002, 07:33 PM
Hey I know I don't speak much and y'all don't know me but give me your opinion on this.

Suicide

He runs, he fights, he dies. Not a soldier against a country, but a soldier against himself. Not taking orders from a man, but taking orders from his sorrow. His own sorrow makes his own army. An army against himself. He runs a race. It's a race that he is running, but it's a race that he is losing. His time. He owns it, he lives it, he races it. He fights a war. Not a war against an army, but a war against a mind. His mind. He owns it, he lives it, he fights it. He dies a death. It's a death that was not chosen, but a death that he will chose. His death. He owns it, he lives it, he dies it. His wasted life a tragedy, but a tragedy that no one mourns. He ran, he fought, he died.

If you don't get it I'll try to explain.

narrator
09-15-2002, 07:47 PM
I like things like this...a mixing of genre's or something along those lines
And, wasted tragedy, thats just about how I feel about it

vatjui
09-15-2002, 08:08 PM
Well at least I'm not the only one who sees the waste, Thanx for your opinion.

Tiffanie
09-16-2002, 05:51 AM
wow thats very very good...iz likes it alot :) :yes:

Snagg3r
09-16-2002, 01:38 PM
its about some bum or who cant takelife anymore so he kills himself :cry: :(

vatjui
09-16-2002, 04:47 PM
You don't know very much do you snagg3r. If you don't know what your talking about then shut the hell up.