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narrator
09-17-2002, 08:14 PM
Lapse into distraction
Hinder with only a stuttering phrase
Break, broken, broke in so many ways
Our patience only frays

Retract into inaction
Wait for a word an opening, a missed chance
Wait, bait, then it becomes clear that its not your rate
Only an imitation hate

Possible continuations; limitations, insinuations
words crossed, patterns lost time in fair
It only happens there
Where a conversation is too much to share

Lie, you know it's true
So many others, just like you
Distinguished by scars and falls
Without that trying wouldn't have mattered at all

Lapse into memory
Silence dealt with alloted pains
Each word a plea for change
Each word a regret never made
Each line a memory to fade
Each sign something lost, something new, something made

Snagg3r
09-17-2002, 08:17 PM
not bad
yo this is just my opinion but that sort of sounded like a rage against the machine song

narrator
09-18-2002, 07:51 PM
Interpretations are strange like that...I don't really wanna tell you how I meant it to send cuz that might ruin your fun

Snagg3r
09-18-2002, 07:56 PM
accually it sounds like it could be a rage agasint the machine dong
is it a song its more like a poem cause it has to courus and my song is completed but im charging a 5 dollar fee to look at it muaaahahhahahahah

narrator
09-18-2002, 08:06 PM
I'm lazy I don't write the chorus over again on most my songs but this wasn't meant as a song...which means I had no melody in mind when I wrote it

Snagg3r
09-18-2002, 08:15 PM
lol RATM has no melody it chanegs thru out the song all the time and it sounds good lol