I'm Still Here

[what_ever]

Sorry for any mis-spellings.. *swedish* lmao and I suck at writing stuff so... yeah but anyway here it is:

http://www.twobeats.com/rp5/ish1.jpg

I'm still here

AVril got into the car with Shannon "What time is it?" Avril asked
"Don't worry, we have plenty of time" Shannon said
"I just don't wan't him to have to wait" Avril said and looked out the window.
She had missed him so much, she got really lonely without the boys.
30 minutes later they arrived at the airport. Avril got out of the car and looked around for a bit...
and there he was, she ran up to him and gave him a big hug "Evan" She said
Evan hugged her back "Hey Av" He said and smiled
"God, i was going crazy without you" she said smiling
"Missed me bad eh?" Evan said laughing
"Ofcorz Ev, you're my best friend, without you here I have no one to talk to" She said as they got in the car
"Ahem" Shannon said "Oh, sorry Shannon but it's not the Same.. Evans my best friend, we can talk about anything
not that i can't talk to you about anything... eh you know what i mean" she said and laughed alittle
"I know" Shannon said and laughed
"So how are you?" Avril asked Evan turning towards him
"I'm tired.. the plane ride killed me" he said leaning back
"Aw, poor Ev... well we can just watch some movies tonight" Avril said leaning her head against his sholder
"Sounds good to mee, we probably shouldn't do anything to wild anyway since we start recordning tomorrow" He said
as the car stopped buy Avrils appartment they got out and walked up to the room.
Avril threw herself on the bed "So what movie do you want to watch?"
Avril asked looking at Evan who sat down on the edge of the bed. "Anything is fine with me" he said

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After the movie booth Evan and Avril were dead tired.
"So where do I sleep?" Evan asked yawning
"Omg, I completly forgot about that..." Avril said looking around the room
"eh... you can't sleep on the sofa cause it's to small.. I guess you're just gonna have to sleep in here
with me tonight" she said
Hearing herself say that she realised how it sounded "I mean.." she started as Evan cut her off
"I know what you ment" Evan said smiling then winked
Avril could feel her cheeks turning red so she looked down
"I'm just going to get ready" She said quickly going into the bathroom
She looked into the mirror.. her cheeks were bright red... and she felt warm and... nervous.
Why was she nervouse? It was Evan.. her best friend in the whole world, whom she loved more than anything..
more than anything? she said to herself... No... she couldn't think like this... they were best friends,
thinking like that would make it awkward, besides, she was pretty sure Evan only thought of her as a friend,
a best friend.

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Evan looked around the appartment. He smiled, he could tell it was Avrils place just buy looking at it,
everything reminded him of her. His best friend..whom he loved more than anything... Evan knew he felt more for Avril
than just a best friend... he'd allways known but he didnt want to feel that way cause he knew Avril
felt nothing more for him than a best friend, and him loving her in that way would complicate things...
he had never been this close to anyone before... and he wasnt about to do anything that might ruin that.

"Your turn" Avril said walking out of the bathroom in a really big t-shirt
Evan smiled She looked adorable, adorable and beautiful... she allways looked beautiful
"What?" Avril said looking at Evan giving him a strange look
Evan shoke his head when he realised he was Stareing "eh.. i was just... Nice T-shirt" He said
Avril Laughed "Well thank you" She said
Evan smiled and walked into the bathroom "Nice save Evan" he said to himself then got ready for bed.

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Evan walked into the bedroom and saw Avril asleep on the bed. He smiled and walked over and laid down beside her.
Avril turned in her sleep puttin her head on his chest holding him. Evan put his arm around her and slowly
drifted to sleep.

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Ok, i know it sucks but I was bored so i thought i'd might try and write one of these...

[laura]

that did not suck! it was brilliant! i'm happy that you decided to start writing!

[KingJJP]

i liked it

[Artemis]

same as laura said!!! it was absolutely fantastic! honest!!

[I_LUV_Evan]

yeah it rocked, its awesome!

[laura]

yes meg! laura is always correct!

[infamous]

wow that was amazing...i agree with laura i'm happy you started to write...i can tell this is the beginning of an amazing story

[what_ever]

aw thanks guys :)

I'm gonna try and NOT forget to write a 2nd Chapter lol

[AvrilandEvan22]

^lol that would be nice...because that was brilliant!!!! I agree with everyone else!!!!

[scarypuffringo]

I agree with everybody else in here. That was really good!!!! I'm looking foward to read the next chap.

P.S: Can I ask you something?? Who are those in your avatar??? I looks like they're kissing or about to kiss... My computer is not really good so I can't see who they are. I'm just curious, that's all. And keep up with the good jb.

[MorningStar]

that was awesome I loved it...I agree with chris...this is going to be an amazing fanfic!

[Bebe]

wow that was awesome!! and for your first fic too!! great job!!! i can't wait for more!! this fic rocks!

[what_ever]

thank you guys :) I actually started writing allitle on the next chapter this morning

scarypuffringo - its Avril and Evan, but they're not kissing.. they're doing....somthing else... what i dont know lmao

[gwen-rox]

that didn't suck it rocked it was kick ass its great can't wait for more

[Artemis]

Originally posted by what_ever@Nov 24 2003, 02:24 AM
scarypuffringo - its Avril and Evan, but they're not kissing.. they're doing....somthing else... what i dont know lmao
lmao....you don't know what they're doing lol....i think they're getting ready to kiss! *dreams*

[what_ever]

Meg - PMSL yupp u're prolly right :D lmfao
seriosly though it looks like Avril is about the bite Evans cheek lmao I asked Malin (the girl who took the pic) and she was like "Uh...they were like hugging or something" yeah.. hugging OR SOMETHING... whats something? lmao

[Get Over It]

Originally posted by what_ever@Nov 23 2003, 08:37 PM
aw thanks guys :)

I'm gonna try and NOT forget to write a 2nd Chapter lol
u can't forget to write more! :P lol

it was great Jo, i loved it ^_^

[AvrilandEvan22]

OR SOMETHING! lmao sorry..this is spam. but that Avatar is very..interesting. or something haha..i think there either kissing or about to kiss....

[what_ever]

^^^ pmsl :P

and Thanks guys, I did start on the chapter but.... LOL I dunno it should be up buy tomorrow but Im not sure, depends on how far i get on it tonight.

[what_ever]

Ok so this one is even worse than the last chapter and again *swedish* so sorry for the spelling.

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I'm Still here

Chapter #2

Avril woke up from the sunlight in her face.
She opend her blue eyes and was met buy Evan face only a couple of inches away.
She smiled, he looked so peaceful... she tried to remove her hand under him without waking him up.
Evan opend his eyes and looked at Avril looking all seriouse trying to get her hand out.
He closed his eyes again and pretended to still be asleep, he rolled closer to her putting his arm around her.
Avril then tried removing her hand without wakeing him again but this time Evan couldnt hold it in and started laughing.
Avril sat up "argh.. i'm gonna.... I'm gonna" she said
"You're gonna what?" Evan said still laughing. Avril took a pillow and hit him wiht it
"Hey!" Evan yelled grabbing a pillow hitting her back and pretty soon there was a full pillow war
with feathers flying everywhere.
Avril was now on top of Evan hitting him with the pillow. Evan grabbed her arms so she couldnt hit him anymore
then started tickleing her. "Noooo" Avril laughed "Evan stop" She said laughing
"Whats in it for me?" He said not stopping "Anything..." Avril said between luaghter
"Anything eh?" He said thinkign for a moment.
"I want..." He said lookign up at her stopping "I want..." he said again
Avril looked down into his eyes her heart was beating a million times a sec.
"I want t..." Evan started as the door flew open. Avril jumped up
"Shannon, have you ever heard of knocking?" Avril asked feeling her cheeks turn red
Evan sat up that was a close one he thought to himself walking into the bathroom
Shannon looked at Avril and smiled "So...whats going on in here?" she asked winking
"NOTHING" Avril said quickley dragging alittle in her t-shirt
"Nothing.. oh yeah sure looked like nothing to me" Shannon said
"Shut up" Avril said walkign over to the dresser pulling some pants out
Shannon laughed "Anyway... meet me downstairs in 45 min" She said walking out and closing the door after her.
Avril sighed and sat down on the bed... she wonderd what Evan was about to say... the look he gave her..
was so warm... he allways made her feel warm inside...what would I do without him Avril thought to herself

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20 minutes later Avril stood outside the bathroom door "Evan... are you done yet?" she yelled
"Um, no but you can come in" he said Avril opend the door and found Evan standing there in a towel
nothing else but a towel... she just stood there looking at him for the longest time... he was so perfect
Evan could feel her stareing and turned and looked at Avril "Do I have a huge sit somewhere or what?" he asked
"Oh no sorry I just though.. " she said looking down "you'd have clothes on" she continued
Evan looked down at the towel"Oh sorry" he said
"Nono, it's ok" Avril said feeling her cheeks turn red again.
She went up to the mirror beside Evan and started putting on her makeup.

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20 minutes later they were booth ready to go and went down and waited for Shannon to bring the car around.
Evan noticed 4 girl coming towards them and looked at Avril who also noticed.
She gave him alittle nod that ment it was ok,
the girls asked for an autograph and a picture then Shannon came wiht the car
"Ok guys Thank you" Avril said waving goodbye to the fans and got in the van
"Bye" Evan said and closed the door to the car after them.
after a few minutes Avril noticed they were going in the wrong direction
"Wait, Shannon this is the wrong way" She said
"Actually no it's not" Evan said smiling "I thought we'd go chill out at the beach for a while" he said..
he knew Av loved the beach "Awwww thats so sweet" she said giving him a hug

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40 minutes later they arrived at the beach, there were no people so it was perfect,
Evan took out a basket with food then looke dat Shannon
"I'll pick you too up in a couple of hours" She said and drove off
"This is perfect" Avril said looking out over the ocean. Evan sat down and opend the basket with food.
After 20 minutes they were booth full
"Thank you so much for this, i really needed it" Avril said smiling at Evan
"You deserve it" he said winking at her. "It's alittle cold though" she said
"Aww come here" Evan said putting his arms aound her looking out over the sand
he saw a flash not to far away "WTF" he said
"What?" Avril asked lookign up at him then over to where Evan was looking
"Oh no" She said seeing the paparzi "The press weill have a trip about this one" She said
"I'm sorry" Evan said standing up grabbing her hand
"Come on let's go somewhere they can't see us" he said as they started running towards some rocks
"We should be out of sight here" he said as they sat down between some rocks
"Why do they have to ruin everything?" Avril asked putting her head on his shoulder
"I know.." Evan said taking her hand
He looked up at her "Av..?" he asked "yeah?" she answerd
"Would you.. I mean... do you..." he said as he got cut of by the cellphone ringing.
"Sorry" Avril said answering. Evan looked down... He couldn't do this...
he loved her to much..he had to tell her soemtime.. but...not now,
he didn't want to loose her and the great friendship they had.

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[I_LUV_Evan]

awesome! poor evan...i want mooorree!!!

[Bebe]

awww.... i loved it!!!! that was so sweet!!! i love this story so much!!! please say you'll be posting more soon!

[MorningStar]

awww that was so cute omg that was adorable I loved it...evan's really hot!

[hinee2002]

aww, i love this story!! it's so cute!!!!

[what_ever]

lol aww thanks guys :)

I will try and write more soon

[gwen-rox]

thats was so good can't wait for more

[Artemis]

OMG That was fantastic! I have this huge grin plastered on my face! That was brilliant! Post more soon!

[Get Over It]

awesome Jo :D i loved it! write more

[what_ever]

awww thank you guys :)

I'm already have most if it written in my head, now i just need to find the time to actually write the next chapter down LOL

[infamous]

awwwwww wow that was brilliant....so cute..... i like the part where she says "Why do they have to ruin everything" it was adorable.... i can't wait for more

[what_ever]

this only gets worse and worse and again Spelling........ *swedish*

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I'm still here

Chapter #3

Avril hung up the phone and looked at Evan. Evan could tell by her face something was wrong
"Av? whats wrong?" He asked
"That was my mum... it's my brother... he's..he.." Avril said and started crying
Evan took her in his arm "He's what?" He asked holding her tight
"He was in a car accident... he's in a coma" She said between the tears
"Omg, Av, I'm so sorry" he said as she leand her head against his chest
"Come on, we'll book the next flight to napanee" he said as they stood up with Evan still holding her
The paparatzis were still there but Evan didnt care, they could thingk what they wanted
Evan called Shannon and 10 minutes later they were on their way to the airport
"Evan" Avril said "Yes Av?" Evan asked lookign at her
"Will you come wite me? I dont think I can do this alone" she said
"Ofcorz I will" Evan said taking her hand

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an hour later they were sitting on the plane to napanee.
Avril was looking out the window. Evan was looking at Avril.
after an hour of silence Evan asked if she was ok
Avril looked up at Evan and shoke her head "No Ev... I'm not" She said feeling the tears coming back
"Hun come here" he said huggin her "I dont know if i could do this without you, thank you" She said huggin him tight
"Av, you know i'd do anything for you, i'm not going anywhere, ever" he said running his hand over her hair

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"Taxi" Evan yelled as they got to the airport. "Napanee hospital" he said as they got in the cab.
"Ev.. what if... he.. he can't die" She said lookign down "Av, don't think like that, he's strong" Evan said taking her hand
Avril nodded as they drove up to the hospital. Judy was waiting outside. Avril ran up to her and hugged her, "your father is inside" Judy said wiht tears in her eyes. Avril nodded and they walked inside.

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Avril slowly opend the door to Matts room... there he was with tubes everywhere, her brother,
he looked so week and pale... she went over to the bed and stood there looking for a while then looked at Ev
"Ev, take me home, I cant be here" She said tears running down her cheeks Evan nodded and told her parents they were going back to their house.
Judy gave him the key to the house and said they'd probably spend the night at the hospital and that Michelle was with her grandparents.

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Evan opend the door for Avril and they walked in It was about 10pm
"We should get some sleep, it's been a long day" Evan said
"Will you sleep in my room tonight?" Avril asked "I dont want to be alone" She said
Evan nodded and they went up to Avrils room. Evan laid down on the bed and Avril laid next to him with her head on his sholder "Ev... thank you for beeing you" She said
she was so happy he was with her, she couldnt handle this on her own. She couldnt belive this was happening
It was so unreal.
Evan gave a small smile "No, thank you for beeing you" he said putting his arms around her
"Everything will be allright" He said
Avril closed her eyes and was soon asleep
Evan laid there for a while just looking at her. "You are so beautiful" he wispeard knowing she was asleep
He tucked her in then put his arm around her, then slowley feel asleep.

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[infamous]

wow that was amazing..i love it , poor matt...btw i love that sig u made its so preety

[Artemis]

Awwww! How adorable! I really like this story! Keep up the good job!!

[Avril_And_3van]

this is an awesome story! luv it! more plz!

[Bebe]

awww that was so sweet!! evan is the best!! great job!! please say you'll be posting more soon!!

[MorningStar]

I agree with everyone here it was awesome amazing work!

[hinee2002]

omg, i love this story!!! ore more more!!!!!

[gwen-rox]

that was so fuckin great want more soon!!

[what_ever]

awwww thanks guys :)

I'm gonna try and start the next chapter today, and it should be up before friday... or thursday we'll see Lol

[AvrilandEvan22]

omg those were awesome!!! lol I love the beach thing....btw that blend is so cool! I'm still here...

[Get Over It]

awwww how cute Jo :D i loved it! can't wait 4 more :)

[**RiotGurl27**]

omg that was gr8. write more pleez!!!!!

[KiD]

omg omg omg!!! that was AMAZING!!! please continue!!!



*coughAWENJcough*

[what_ever]

awwww thanks guys,
well I was on a buss for 2½ hours today so I had some time to write... so here's the next chapter and again sorry for the spelling *still swedish* lol

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I'm still here

Chapter #4

Evan woke up and looked around, Avril wasn't in the room "Av?" He asked sitting up
He went out into the hallway and downstairs "Av?" he said again getting alittle worried
After looking through all the rooms downstairs he went up and looked through the rooms,
He found Avril sitting in Matts room on his bed with her hands around her knees.
"Av?" Evan said walking over to her sitting down by the bed taking her hand
Avril looked up at Evan and brushed away a tear
"I just... I don't know, Ev... I can't go back to the hospital, I can't see him like that" She said
"You dont have to Av, you don't have to" he said giving her a hug
Avril leaned her head against his chest "And what about the CD.. the studio...the.." Avril said
Evan cut her off "No Av, don't worry about that, I called LA yesterday,
they will rescedual it for a couple of weeks" he said running his hand over her hair
"What would i do without you" Avrils said. EVan gave a small smile and didnt say anything
instead he just kissed her forhead and kept holding her

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Avril sat in the TV-room watching the TV, she had no idea what she was watching,
all she could thing about was her brother. She had the phone right buy her side incase
her mother called.
Evan walked into the room with a cup of tea "here you go" He said sitting down beside her
handing her the cup of tea "Thank you" She said taking it
"Do you want to do anything? want anything else?" Evan asked
"Can we just... be here today" Avril asked looking up at Evan then down at the cup of tea
"I feel...I mean, I want to be here if they call" She said
Evan nodded "We'll do anythign you want" he said looking at the TV.
MTV news was on
Next up, Avril Lavigne and her guitarist getting cosey at the beach....
the two speant the da...
They were showing some pics from the beach, and ofcorz they made it look like something it wasnt.
Evan quickley turned it off "I'm sorry Av" he said
Avril shook her head "Not your fault" she said with a small smile
Evan nodded and gave a small smile back
"Wanna watch a movie?" Avril asked. she didn't really care about watching a movie,
she just wanted an excuse to lay in Evans arms, she allways did when they were watching movies.
Evan smiled "Sure" turning on the VCR "Freaky friday?" He asked "Sounds good" She said
Evan walked back to the Sofa and sat down. Avril got alittle closer and lay her head in his lap.
Evan smiled and put his arm around her. Avril took his hand and then lay there and watched the TV
although the movie was the last thing on her mind.

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Avril and Evan woke up from the phone ringing. They had booth fallen asleep,
Avril jumped at the phone "Hello?" she asked. It was her mother
"OMG, we'll be right there" She said and hung up the phone
"What happend?" Evan asked worried
Avril smiled "He woke up.. he's going to be ok" She said. She felt like the world lifted from her chest
"OMG, thats wonderful Av, lets go" he said grabbign the car keys.

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"I'll wait out here" Evan said as Avril walked into her brothers room
She walked over to the bed "Matt" she said giving him a hug
"Well, look who came to visit" he said smiling
"Don't you ever scare me like that again" She said
Matt laughed "I will try" he said
The two sat and talked for a while until the nurse came in and said that
the visiting hours were over. Avril said goodbye and walked out to Evan
"I'm so happy right now" She said smiling "I can tell" Evan said smiling
"Lets go out... go have dinner and some beers" She said
Evan nodded "Sounds like a plan" he said
He loved seeing Avril this happy, it made him happy.

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[Bebe]

aww that was great!! im so happy that matt is alright now!! aww avril and evan are so cute together!!!!! this story rocks!!

[Artemis]

^Ditto!!! I'm glad you remembered to keep posting lol

[ninny_23]

great chapter it was awfully sweet

[what_ever]

awww thanks guys

Meg- LOL yeah, If i dont start on it the day after, I will most likely forget lmao

[rozie]

aww this is such a good story, i kinda thought i should start readin more of these things

[Get Over It]

that was great Jo! :D

[AvrilandEvan22]

aww that was awesome!! i'm so glad matt's ok...lol she's just looking for an excuse to lay in evan's arms!!

[what_ever]

again... spelling... *swedish*

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I'm still here

Chapter #5

Avril sat down at a table looking around... It was cute, not alot of people.
"I'm so happy your happy again" Evan said giving her a bear
Avril smiled "Thanks" She said "I'm happy to be happy" SHe said laughing
"and that Matt is ok, I was so scared for him" She said
Evan nodded "But he's fine now" he said smiling
Avril nodded with a huge grin on her face
Evan laughed "Your so cute" he said. Avril blushed "No I'm not" She said
"Are you kidding? your the most beautiful person i've ever met... inside and outside" he said
realising what he said he felt himself blush.
Avrils face was now all red. She looked up at Evan
he thinks i'm beautiful? she thought to herself.
There was a few minutes of silence
Nice going Evan he thought to himself "Want another beer?" He asked standing up
Avril nodded "mhm" she said looking at him walking over to the bar
Hearing him say those words... she'd dreamt about hearing those words from him.
But... it didnt mean he liked her like that...did it?

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Evan waited for the beers and looked back at Avril... that was awkward he thought to himself
He couldn't tell her... if me telling her she was beautiful was that awkwards then...
imagin if i told her i love her he thought to himself...
The bartender came wiht the beers Evan payed and walked over and handed her the beer.
After a while it was like that awkward moment had never existed.

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After about an hour booth Avril and Evan were pretty drunk.
They were booth laughing about everything.
"We should head home" Evan said between laughter
Avril nodded "I guess we shoulddddd" she said as they grabbed their coats and walked outside.
"Lets walk" Avril said "Walk?" Evan wined
"Come on lasy" she said laughing
"ok ok" Evan said and pouted
"Awww" Avril said putting her head on his sholder
"Hey look, the old park lets go, please, please please?" She said dragging Evans arm
"Ok Ok" Evan said as they walked over.
Avril slipped on the grass dragging Evan with her
Evan landed ontop of Avril and at first they were booth laughing,
then they looked at eachother.
Notecing the possition they were in Evans mind was telling him to stand up but
his heart just wanted to look into Avrils eyes
Avril couldnt stoop looking into EVans eyes either...
they laid there looking at eachother for a while.
Evan slowly leaned in and kissed Avril on the lips,
Avril didnt fight it, her heart wanted it just as much as Evans.

after a min Evan came to his sence and pulled away and sat up
"Av.. I'm sorry.. I dont know what cam over me"he said looking down.
Avril looked at him "Ev..." She said sitting up putting her hand on his cheek
turning his head her way.
She looked into his eyes, her heart was pounding a million beats a sec
"I love you" She said her eyes not leaving his.
Did she just say she loved me? Evan thought to himself... yes she did... he couldnt belive it
Evan couped her face in his hands and kissed her again "I love you too" he said and kissed her again
Avril couldnt belive it... was she dreaming? she pinched her arm
"Ouch" she said
"what? did i hurt you?" Evan said quickly sitting up
"Nono" she said and smiled
"I just wanted to see if i was awake.. cause this must be a dream" She said taking his hand
Evan laughed then smiled "I've allways loved you Av" he said running his finger along her jawline
Avril smiled... she was the happiest girl in the world right now...

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Avril and Evan walked up the stairs to her room carefully so her parents wouldnt wake up
Avril closed the door after them then lock the door.
Evan laid down on the bed and Avril walked over and laid beside him.
Evan looked at Avril removing a string of hair from her face
"God your beauiful" he said and smiled Avril blushed and looked up at him and kissed him
"So are you" she said between kisses.

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[laura]

awwwwww that was so cute!!!! awwwwwww

[Artemis]

"God your beauiful" he said and smiled Avril blushed and looked up at him and kissed him
"So are you" she said between kisses.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww that part is so freaking adorable! Again, I have a huge grin on my face! Post more soon!

[what_ever]

thanks guys :)

I will start writting more tomorrow lol

I made a banner for Chapter 1 and 2 also lmao so here are all the banners:

http://www.twobeats.com/rp5/ish1.jpg
http://www.twobeats.com/rp5/ish2.jpg
http://www.twobeats.com/rp5/ish3.jpg
http://www.twobeats.com/rp5/ish4.jpg
http://www.twobeats.com/rp5/ish5.jpg

[KiD]

omg, that was so incredible!!! and the banners rock!!! whare are those pics!!!! lol!!!!!

[Artemis]

Brilliant banners!!!!

[what_ever]

Meg Thank you :D

Kid- Thank you :) the pics are from... diffrent places lmao, the DVD, soem german show, live, Sweden, Lili Clair, Diary, Germany...
yeah lmfao

[MorningStar]

aww that was so cute...they kissed...awww...and those benners are gnarly

[Dee]

Great work Jo. There's no end to your talent.

Di

[eval]

your story is really really good!!

and I was wondering.... is this picture in your avatar and in the banner of the 4th chapter (on the right site) fake?!
it looks like avril and evan kissing,... :( its a really great picture :D

[Get Over It]

aawwwwwww that was the best chapter so far Jo :D sooo cute. i loved it !

[what_ever]

thanks guys :)

eval - Nope its from Sweden © Malin and they're not kissing lol
they're doing something else... what i do not know LMAO

[Bebe]

aww that was awesome What_ever!! i loved it!! great job!! that was so so so so sweet!! avril and evan are finally together!!!

[AvrilandEvan22]

lmao..something else....THAT IS SOOO CUTE!!!!!!! "God you are beautiful" lol i love that part!!! great job awwww they're finally together!
AWESOME banners by the way

[rozie]

wens the nxt chapter goin 2 b up???

[what_ever]

thanks guys :)

I'm not really in the mood to write tonight,
Im sorta angry at 2 ppl right now and I cant stop thinking about it, so I will hopefully not be pissed of tomorrow lmao
I will try and start it tomorrow.

[Get Over It]

ok good, bc i can't hardly wait 4 the next chapter..

[laura]

lol, we can understand that joie! its all good!

[*janey*]

awww.... your story is sooo *cute*! you're a very talented gurl, jo!

[what_ever]

THanks guys,
ok, I had an idea for the next chapter but it sorta just went *poof* away lol If it comes back to me, the next chapter will hopefully be up today or tomorrow.

[Get Over It]

lolz, i can't wait 4 more!

[AvrilandEvan22]

lol *bump* well i can't wait for it!!!

[what_ever]

again... Spelling *swedish* and this one really suck...

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Chapter #6

The Next day Evan woke up noticing Avril wasn't in the bed he sat up "Av?" He said lookign around
He found a note by the bed.
Hey Love,
Meet me at the airport at 1pm,
Love and kisses,
xo Avril
Evan smiled... "Wonder what shes up 2" he said getting dressed

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1pm Evan stood at the airport waiting for Avril.
"Ev" Avril yelled coming up from behind him
"There you are" He said taking her in his arms lifting her up
Avril laughed "Put me down" She said "We're in a hurry" She said
"Where are we going?" Evan asked
"It's a suprice" Avril smiled
Evan gave her a -I dont know about this- kinda look
"Oh come on, Its gonna be great I promise" Av said dragging him to the plane
"Ok, I'm coming, I'm coming" Evan said laughing

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2 hours later Evan couldnt stand not knowing where they were going anymore
"Are we there soon?" Evan asked looking at Avril
"Soon" Av said smiling as the pilot said "We'll be landing in a few minutes please fasten
your seetbelts."
Ones they landed they got in a cab and they pulled up by the beach.
"The beach?" Evan said "We're going sailing" Avril grinned
"You're kidding right?" Evan said smiling...
"Nope.. 2 days, just you and me and a boat.." Avril said wiht a huge grin on her face
Evan raised his eyebrows "mmmm I like the sound of that" He said grabbing her waist
Avril Laughed and kissed him "Come on" She said taking his arm dragging him to the boat

~~~~~~

an few hours later they were out on the sea They stopped the boat outside a small island
and went down in the boat. It was getting late and they we're getting tired.
"Thank you so much for this" Evan said kissing Avril
Avril smiled "It's nothing" She said kissing him back "no, its alot" he said kissing her
"I love you so much" Avril said as the boat started rocking back and forward
"What was that?" Avril said "I'm gonna go check it out" Evan said getting up
"No Evan... " Avril said "Don't worry" he said and smiled walking up.
Ones he opend the door to the back of the boat the wind got a hold on him and he was thrown to the end of the boat.
It was rainging and a storm was building up.
Avril ran up to the door when she heard the storm
"Evan get back in here" She screamd. Evan dragged himself closer to the door but the wind was too strong
and he was thrown over board. "Evan!" Avril screamd as the boat shoke and Avril fell down the stairs
and everything turned black.

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[KiD]

OMG!!!! THat was amazing!!!!!!!!! What happens to Evan!!!! LET HIM LIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


lol, I get carried away sometimes...

[laura]

omg evan!!!!

[Dee]

This story is getting very interesting. I wonder what happened to Evan. I hope he's ok.

[Get Over It]

that was amazing Jo! :D

[AvrilandEvan22]

ahhhhh!!!!!!! let him live lol awesome job, plz tell us what happens soon!!!!!

[what_ever]

Thanks guys :)

I'll try and write more soon, this week has been hell wiht school, but after tomorrow it should cool down 'til after xmas... well actually... til the 20th then i'll have another puppie to take care of LOL but yes, I will start ont he next chapter tomorrow :)

[Artemis]

Originally posted by KiD@Dec 3 2003, 07:27 PM
OMG!!!! THat was amazing!!!!!!!!! What happens to Evan!!!! LET HIM LIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


lol, I get carried away sometimes...
ROFLMFAO!!!!!!!!!! lmfao...that's fucking hilarious...lol...let him live! hahaha....awwwwwwwww joie!!!! it was wondeful!!! i loved it...you gotta post more soon!

[rozie]

wns the nxt chapter up????

[Extreme Rock]

i just read the story n its brilliant ur really good at writing!! more more more :)

[*janey*]

omg!! where's the next chapter?!?!

[Extreme Rock]

I have to agree i did get into this one, post moreeeee

[what_ever]

ops sorry guys, Ive been busy... Im gonna try and write it sunday

[AvrilandEvan22]

^woo hoo!!! thats tomorrow lol i'll Still Be Here waiting!!!

[DearSweetImpaler]

haha..i see what you've done there smarty! lol :P
can't wait for more :D

[what_ever]

*cough* ok so its wensday... sorrie, ive been sooo so so busy this wek I hardly have time to breath :P Ive had finals and projects due, plus im going to get my new puppie saturday and we have to get everything ready (take away everything she can eat lmao) but yes, I will start writting this Hopefully tomorrow after all the school stuff is done :)

[punkaliciousk8tr]

I can't wait to read more this story rocks!

[Get Over It]

i agree! :D it rox!

[*janey*]

awww..i can't wait until the next chapter....

[Muqaddas_Farishta]

^ another story I just caught up to.. AAWESOME job!! I can't wait for more and I hope Ev lives!

[ninny_23]

so apparently Evans dead and the stories over?

[Muqaddas_Farishta]

Are you ever gonna write more? I NEED to know what happens to Evan! Hurry and write more!

[what_ever]

Sorrie guys, My lifes just been wayyyy to busy to keep up this story, I will try to write the next chapter soon.

[what_ever]

Ok sorry about not posting in like FOREVER lol
but i saw a movie last ngiht and it inspried me to write alittle
so heres chapter 7,
it sucks but... yeah

again... Spelling *swedish*

http://www.twobeats.com/rp/ish7.jpg

I'm still here

Chapter # 7

Avril slowly open her eyes.. what happend? she asked herself
and like a flash everything came back to her
she sat up qucikly in the bed...
"What the..." She said looking around here... she was in a white room
it looked like a... yes a hospital... how did she end up here...
Avril rang the nurse bell and a nurse came
"A, your awake" She said and smiled
"Evan... where is Evan?" Avril asked
"The guy you were with...I'm sorry but he is in a coma" the nruse said
Avril couldnt belive it... "no" she said shaking her head
"I'm so sorry miss.. would you like me to take you too him?" She asked
Avril just nodded and followed the nurse to his room.
Avril slowly opend the door, there was Evan laying on the bed he had a scar on his head
the blong stipes of his hair coverd it. Avril sat down by the bed and took his hand
"Ev?" She said a tear rolling down her face.

About an hour later a doctor came into the room, Avril had been sitting there holding
his hand, her eyes not leaving his closed eyes the whole hour.
"Miss Lavigne?" the doctor said
"Yes?" Avril said wiping the tears away
"We need to contact his family, do you have his parents phone number?" he asked
Avril nodded and gave it to him and the doctor went to call them
"wait" Avril said just as he was about to close the door
"Is he going to..." Avril looked at Evan...yet another tear rolling down her face
"ok?" She continued... she was afraid of the answer...
"hes ben in a coma for 3 days... im afraid it doesnt look good"
he said leaving to make the call
"3 days?" Avril asked herself... she had been out for 3 days...
She looked at Evan

"Ev... you can't do this to me... you cant leave me" She said tears rolling down her chin.
she took his hand and leaned her head against their bound hands.
"I just got you... i cant loose you now... without you... theres no reason to live Ev..."
She said "No reason..." she wispeard crying and shaking her head

Evan heard the faint voice of Avril... he slowly opend his eyes and saw Avril
by the bed crying and holding his hand. She looked like an angel...
so beautiful even when she was crying. Evan squeezed her hand smiling tierdly

Avril gasped and looked up and was greated by the most beautiful eyes she knew...
tired eyes but still the most beautiful. "Ev?" She said
"my angel" Evan said using all his strength to lift his hand up to her cheek
"Oh Ev... i though you...you... dotn ever leave me" She said hugging him carefully
Evans didnt have enough strange to answer but he gave her a reasuring look
Avril smiled with happy tears now rolling down her chins.
Avril leaned over him and gave him a soft kiss on the lips. Evan smiled as did Avril
"Dont ever scare me like that again" She said

A few days later

Avril just said goodbye to Evans parents and went back up to Evan.
He had to stay in bed for a week, doctors orders,
he was suppose to be at the hospital but Evan hated hospitals and
the doctor had agreed to let him stay home if he stayed in bed.
Evan was upstairs... he was nervouse...what if she'd say no?... they were young..
but he loved her... yes.. he was going to do this...he thought to himsefl
as Avril enterd the room
"Hey beautiful" Evan said
"Hey beautiful" she said back smiling
"Av... theres something I want to ask you" He said taking her hand
"what?" She said alittle worried, he could see he was nervouse
"Av... I love you.." he said
"I lo" she started but Evan put his fingers over her mouth
"Let me finish" he said
Avril nodded now even more worried
"I love you... I have loved you since the first time I saw you... you allways have this
bright light around you.. like and angel... my angel... I never though it was possible
to feel this... close... intense... loving feeling. Av... I want to spend the rest of my
life with you.." he said taking out a little box from underneith his pillow..
"Av... will you marry me?" He asked looking up at her beautiful blue eyes.

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to be continued

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[Dee]

Aww, how cute. It was great. I'm glad you're still writing.

[KiD]

That was so wicked Jo!

Damn cliffhangers!!! lmao.

[Muqaddas_Farishta]

CLIFF HANGER!!!!!!! GRRR!!! IT's AWESOME!!! Write more soon!!!!!!!!!

[StIcKy_nOtE15]

awwwwwwwwwwwww this is a cute story i love it keep writing more soon

[Get Over It]

awww so cute. post more, Jo!

[Squirt]

This is such a cute story! write more!

[*janey*]

OMG! keep writing plzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!

[Muqaddas_Farishta]

Post more really sooon pllllllleeeeeeaassssseeeeeee :D

[what_ever]

thanks guys :)
I'm gonna try and start writting the next chapter tomorrow,
I was going to tonight but something came up and its 3am now lol

[AvrilandEvan22]

awwwww so cute!!!! I can't wait for it!!

[vixsk8ink]

hey where's the next chapter i cant wait for what happens next awesome story!!!!!lol

[PaintedNails]

I'm a little late, but I love this story! I hope you get more up soon!!

[ninny_23]

I'm not sure if she's gonna write anymore of this story...

[what_ever]

^^ I am, Ive started... sorry guys but work is taking to much time and updateing twobeats... Im gonna try and post it soon, ive written some of it.

[ninny_23]

Yay! Good news *throws confetti*

[what_ever]

ok so guess what...






lol i actually wrote some more last night n its almost done,
just have to write a few more lines
should be up by sometime this weekend

[Bebe]

YAY!!! i can't wait to read it!

[AvrilandEvan22]

I can't wait!! lol wow...I had the last post before the bump. :special:

[what_ever]

ok im not done yet LOL so sorry,
I had some stuff that came up over the weekend.
I will finish it this week though even if ti kills me lol

[DearestHelpless]

Ha...Take your time.

[ninny_23]

can't wait for more of the story, take as long as you need. just look at Meg and Will lol

*no offence was meant to be given in this post*

[Artemis]

I didn't know you posted the next chapter! Well...what does she say?!!

[what_ever]

edit- Ok so my net is working again so it should be up this week :)

[ninny_23]

YAY IT'S GONNA BE UP THIS WEEK!!!!

[what_ever]

Ok this one really sucks and again... Spelling *swedish*

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I'm still here

Chapter # 8

Avril looked at the ring then up at Evan...
she couldnt think.. or breath, she paniced and ran out of the room
into the bathroom and locked the door. She took a deep breath.
WHat was she doing? why did she run? She loved Evan... why not marry him?
she took a look in the mirror, she didnt like what she saw,
she didnt see herself, she saw a scared little girl.
She saw herself when she was 14... her boyfriend...or so called boyfriend
at the time had almost raped her... she had never allowed herself to love someone
liek she had then again... until now... as much as she was afraid too, she loved Evan,
more than anything and she knew Evan would never hurt her... but she was so afraid.
she shoke her head "that was years ago, move on" She told herself looking into the mirror.

Evan had just sat there for about 10 minutes looking at the door.
SHe just ran of...why? She didnt love him? but she did... he knew she did
but maybe not in teh same way or as much as he loved her... he had messed up
it was to early... "Stupid" he said hitting his head he sat up grining,
he had soem broken ribs..but he couldnt stay here... not right now he grabbed his jacket
and slowly made his way down the stairs and called a cab

Avril heard a car pull up and a door close... she opend the door and looke dout the window
and saw Evan get in and the cab drive away. She ran down the stairs and outside
"EV NO WAIT" she screamd but it was to late the car was gone...
she sat down on the ground shaking her head... what had she done?
he was gone... was he coming back?
avril wiped a tear from her cheek and slwoly walked into the house.
She grabbed the phone and dialed Evans number and head Evans voice
"hey this is Evan, you know the drill".. it was his machine...
she hung up and went into the bathroom.
she hated herself... she saw her raisor and took the blade out.
Evan was gone... she had no reason to go on...
she put the blae against the skin of her wrist...

at the same time Evan had decided to go back... he couldnt just leave
he needed answers... now.
he walked up the stairs and into the bathroom. He couldnt belive what he saw
"AV, NO" He said runnign into teh bathroom
Avril had just started to press the blade down and saw the first drop of blood on
the raisor as she heard Evs voice. Evan quickly took the blad eaway from her
"What are you doing.. omg Av" he said takign her wrist and pressing paper against it
he looked at it.. "thank god" he said when he realised it wasnt that deep.
Avril looked down at the floor tears falling down her cheeks.
"Av?" Ev said
she shoke her head "Im sorry" She said quietly
Evan sat down next to her rocking her in his arms
"I hate myself for doing this to you Ev" she said crying
"shhh" he said holding her tight
"I just... I'm scared" she said looking up at him as he wipes away a tear from her face
"Not of you... I really love you... with all of my heart... and without you
theres no reason to be... but I can not stop thinking about Tom and what he did" She said
Evan knew all about what had happend
"Avril... I will never do anything liek that to you... and I would never
make you do soemthing you didnt want or were ready to do" he said kissing her forhead
"I know Ev...Im sorry" she said lookign up at him then rest her head against his chest
after 10 minytes of silens Avril finally opend her mouth "Yes" she said
"yes?" Evan said confussed
"Yes Ev" she said looking up at him "I would want nothig more than to marry you" She said
smiling alittle.
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[Crystal]

I just started reading this story tonight and I have to say, it's the most adorable thing I've ever read! Honestly. I love it! You're a great writer and Avril and Evan are so cute!

[ninny_23]

aww that was so sweet!

[PaintedNails]

Awww it was a litte short, but cute

[*janey*]

awww omg! that was so sweet!

[AvrilandEvan22]

Awww that is so cute!! aww it's adorable!

[what_ever]

thanks guys :)

I did start ont eh next chapter, ill get it up as soon as possible... there will be only 2 more chapters of this story (making it 10 chapters)

[ninny_23]

2 more chapters!!!!! well, the story is great and i really love it!!! *faints*

[what_ever]

Ok, so I can not think of anything to write....
so im ending the story... its a really cheesy chapter, sorry lol

again... Spelling *swedish*

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Chapter # 9

Avril woke up by the sunlight hitting her face, she slowly opend her eyes
and noticed that Evan wasnt there...she sat up quickly lookign around...
"Evan" she said.. no answer.... "EVAN" she yelled
"yes" Evan said coming intot he room with a towel around his hips and
another one in his hand that he was drying his hair with.
Avril looked him over... he was so perfect... his stomache... chest...
strong arms... his face... the way his hair landed in it... and his eyes
he had the most amazing blue eyes.
Evan blushed alittle notecing Avril lookign at him
Avril giggeld when she noticed his cheeks turning pink
she got up from the bed and walked over to Evan and ran her fingers through his hair
Evan opend his mouth to say soemthing but Avril locked her lips with his before he could say anything
Evan smiled and kissed her back
"Morning" Avril said smiling
"Morning" Evan smiled
"Im gonna take a shower" Avril said grabbing a towel
Evan nodded "ok I'll start breakfast" He said while reaching down to grab a brush that was on the floor
Avril took of her t-shirt and went over to the door then tosed the t-shirt at Evans feet
Evan looked at the t-shirt then slowly up at Avril
she stood halfway behind the door playfully smiling at Evan
Evan looked at her, she was so perfect, so beautiful,
her milky white skin her lips... everything about her was perfect
Evan made a "rawr" sounds "you are such a teese" he said
Avril laughed, winked and then closed the door
Evan shoke his head and smiled to himself then went downstairs to make breakfast

Avril stepped out of the shower 15 minutes later.
She put some clothes on and headed downstairs and into the kitchen were Evan was
She smiled and sneeked up behind him putting her arms around his waist.
Evan turned around "You scared me" he said smiling and kissed her and they sat down
"We should probably set a date.." Avril said after a few minutes of silence
Evan nodded "and a place" he added
"I dont want anything big, i just want my parents and the other guys there" She said
Evan nodded "me too" he said smiling
"You know... theres this little park in napanee... it would be perfect" Avril said
"I dont care where it is, I just want to spend the rest of my life with you" he said
"Awwww, Ev... you are just to sweet" She said going over to him and sit down on his lap
"Lets just do it.... we'll call out parents, My mum will be happy to fix all the stuff and
we will get your parents plane ticets.
Evan nodded "Are you gonna wear a dress?" he asked
Avril nodded "Yes, Ev... it will be the first time in forever, but i will be wearing a dress
at my wedding" She said
Evan smiled at the thought of her in a dress... "You will look beautiful" He said
"but you allways do, you could wear a plastic bag and still be the most beautiful person on earth"
he said kissing her softly
Avril kissed him back and took his hand leading him up the stairs
"Where are we going?" Evan asked
Avril didnt respond but dragged him to her room and stopped by the bed and removed his shirt
Evan looked at her takign her hand "Are you sure?" he asked. He didnt want to do anything she didnt
feel ready to do.
Avril nodded "More sure than ive ever been about anything" She said removing her own shirt
revealing a pink bra with black dots on it.
Evan looked avril over from head to top "god, your beautiful" he said couping her face with his hands
and kiss her
Avril started to unbotton Evans pants and withing a few moments they were on the bed.

later...
Evan held Avril laying on the bed
Avril ran her fingers up and down his arm. "Wow" she said
Evan nodded "yeah... wow" he said
Avril had never felt so close to anyone before,
she felt a calm, happy feeling, she was inlove...
and she knew Evan was the guy she would spend the rest of her life with...
"Never let me go" She said
"I'm yours forever" Evan answerd

a few weeks later

Evan stood waiting for Avril.
They were in that small park in napanee with their friends and family.
Avril walked up the hill in the park towards Evan
Evan smiled at her, She had w cream colord no sleaved dress on, simple and beautiful
her hair was alittle wavey and she had flowers in it.
she was the most perfect sight he'd ever seen.
their eyes didnt leave eachother durring the whole ceremony.
"you can now kiss the bride"
They kissed, infront of the persons they loved most in this world.
they looked at eachother smiling
"I Love you"

THE END
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[KiD]

awwwwww aww awwwwwwww! I love it! awwwwwww AWENJ!!!!
And I can't get the image of Avril in her wedding dress out of my head! Incroyable!! Awesome work Jo!

[AvrilandEvan22]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW omfg that was absolutely adorable. awwwww

[Crystal]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was so adorable.

[ninny_23]

that is great! a perfect ending to a great story!

[Dee]

How sweet. I really liked it.

[Dryve Thru Romance]

ohh aww it was adorable! omg i loved it! :D ahh! i omg i lvoed it sooo much haah it was awesome!

[what_ever]

thanks for the feedback guys :)

[Artemis]

OMFG Joie!! Awwwwwwwwwww omg I have this huge ass grin on my face lmfao. Unbelievable.