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Tiffanie
10-14-2002, 07:01 AM
ok this poem is actually one of my favorites..but you tell me what ya'll think abou it k...thanx

"This life"
This is but my life
a life of pain and heartache
days of uncontrolable pain
unstopable tears
streaming down my face
running off my cheeks
broken through and through
heart shattered
nights of crieing
sobbing through the night
wake in the morning
eyes puffy and sore
time to start a new day
more tears to come
more people to break me apart
falling so fast
theres nothing left
no more reason to go on
this is but my life
a life no one will ever understand
alone here
my fear taking me over
my heart shouting out
this is my life
a life i cant hold on to anymore

*october 3 2002*

narrator
10-14-2002, 07:02 AM
Holy crap, now I want to die
*turns head away so you can't see the tears*

Tiffanie
10-14-2002, 07:05 AM
aww now come on....hehe...thats just how i was feelin at the time...im slowly getting better..no worries

Tiffanie
10-14-2002, 07:06 AM
but did you like the poem?????

narrator
10-14-2002, 07:07 AM
Yeah but I'm still sad.....I need an emoticon to cheer me up

Tiffanie
10-14-2002, 07:09 AM
hmmm well
:)
^Always smile even when it hurts

narrator
10-14-2002, 07:12 AM
^smiling is proven to raise a person's mood...*strains a smile*

Tiffanie
10-14-2002, 07:14 AM
good job...keep on smilin'

narrator
10-14-2002, 07:18 AM
*feels freakishly plastic right now but continues to smile*

Tiffanie
10-14-2002, 07:19 AM
are my poems really that sad????
cause everyone seems to act the same
way as you are right now...
it kinda makes me not want to write ne more

narrator
10-14-2002, 07:21 AM
never stop...and from experience I know that you couldn't anyway...
writing is a part of who you are...it goes deeper than sadness or happiness. Don't try to break the fibers in your soul because others.
Never stop

Tiffanie
10-14-2002, 07:23 AM
ok thanx for that...i'll keep writing
...but they are still going to be sad

narrator
10-14-2002, 07:26 AM
life is life
There is nothing you can do to change it
Nothing that will make it different
Just support to use
To keep you there until there is no more fuse

Tiffanie
10-14-2002, 07:27 AM
good words there
:)

Snagg3r
10-14-2002, 08:11 AM
:mrgreen: