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FallingDown
03-31-2004, 09:15 AM
I wanted to write something, so I started on this. So, whatever.

Chapter 1 - The story so far

The night is tired, with the moon faithfully falling into place. My eyes stare down at the watch on my wrist, lending me the time. Its twelve O’clock, midnight and my hand slips back into its original position. My hand folded neatly inside of Amy’s.
The sky is filled with darkness, and the shining of every little star, and I quietly name one after her. She doesn’t know it, that I’ve picked one out just for her. How do you ever know which one is the right star to pick out and name? And I’ll always wonder where that star will fall next time night falls, I wonder if I’ll ever be able to recognise it.
“I wonder if they ever get lonely” came Amy’s angel voice.
“If what get lonely?” I asked.
“The stars” she said softly, her eyes fixed upwards, her every breath taking in the air. Slowly her eyes make their way back down to earth, in line with mine, just the way I like it. I offer a gentle smile, not knowing the answer. Do stars ever get lonely? Are they just as lonely up there as we get down here? And if they ever get lonely, do they prefer it that way?
“I wonder” It wasn’t the answer she was looking for, but despite that she smiled and wrapped her arm through mine, moving herself in closer to me. I do the only thing I know best and I pull her in, and hold her close. I can smell her scent, one I won’t easily forget and I feel calm and comfortable and I hope that she feels safe and at home in my grasp.
“I think they do” she said whilst we continued to walk. I don’t need to answer her, because there’s nothing more to say, she has her answer. Whether it’s ever right or wrong, she believes that up there in the depths of the sky into the unknown, those shining stars get lonely. It’s all she has to say and my mind is clinging onto thoughts which I can’t get my head around. While we walk making our way to the club, I continue to wonder, questioning thing’s I’ll never know. I wonder if the stars feel pain, do they cry tears, silent tears? Can they feel the air? Do they have a way of looking down on us? Taking in everything that goes on below them, me, Amy, everything.

My eyes are burning, the coldness swoops down blowing inside my eyes, forcing me to hold onto my jacket. The gust of wind so sudden and unexpected, just when everything was so calm and perfect and even though I don’t know what perfect is or that if it can ever be defined, at least I have a sense of perfect, of what it means to me.
“Ev, it’s freezing” Amy tugs at me, and I’ve become so caught up in the change in the air and with her being so silent, I forget that she’s beside me feeling the cold too. The sharpness touching her face and if it had hand’s they’d be round our necks choking us, and somehow the wind doesn’t seem so unfriendly.
“Come here” I softly say. I start to take of my jacket, getting ready to wrap it around her.
“No, Ev then you’ll freeze, and I don’t want to be walking around with an icicle”.
“And, what’s so wrong with that?” we break into laughter, at the same time in tune with each other and were not hysterical but were happy, both happy to be here at this time and place.
I pull my jacket back on and again were side by side, seeming somewhat warmer. The sharpness of the air and the violence in the wind, wasn’t going to tear us from each other. If anything it made us hold on that much more.

We were walking to me, for what seemed forever but that didn’t bother me. I could have walked to the ends of the earth for all I cared, it’s dark, late but I’m not tired, not as tired as the night has become.
We start nearing the club and as we get inches closer I feel Amy start to fall behind, and my arms are empty. I turn to find her kneeling on the floor. I realise she’s tying up her laces. I stare at her, and watch her as she carefully loops them together, just like a helpless child learning how to do their laces for the first time. Only she’s not a kid anymore but I see the child inside her of what she used to be, and now the girl that she’s become.
I couldn’t tell you if I’ve fallen in love with her yet or if she was falling in love with me. I’ve only ever thought I was in love once and that wasn’t pretty. All I know is that love is a feeling that causes emotions, it can shatter and break but it can be that familiar scent that you love to wake up too. It can fill the emptiness inside of you, it can be incredible. It’s strange how love can make you feel all those amazing feelings for one person but then somewhere along the line that fades away and dies, like it never existed.
In some ways it can be just like a flower that dies, despite all your attempts to keep it alive, no matter how much you look after that flower treating it like your pride possession, caring for it, careful not to break a petal, it will break and eventually like love, like a relationship the petals that hold sunshine and happiness inside of everyone of them, slowly it takes all that away until there’s nothing left. Until it remains empty, no petal left to call its own.
Somehow the scent and the memory of that flower will always exist. Just like you’ll remember your first love always knowing that it won’t be your last, because as much as it hurts to get your heart broken, you need to get hurt. Sometimes you need to cry and need to know heartache to learn. It’s the way of life, it’s not all pleasant but it’s not all grey skies and crying eyes.
I know that with Amy, right now I don’t want to think about how we break up, because even though I seem negative about this, I know that she’s meant to be in my life. I also know that she may not be in it forever. She could be taken away from me in the blink of an eye. This could all fall from my hands and one day, maybe weeks, months down the line, I will lose what we have and as much as I don’t want that and hate that thought, it will and If it doesn’t then that’s some miracle.

“Is this the place, Ev?” Amy moaned. I could sense that she’d rather have stayed at the hotel but I promised Avril that we would come and join her and her new found boyfriend Ryan. Everyone has a fixed obsession that me and Avril are the perfect couple. Best friends means you have to fall in love at some point apparently. Well if that was anywhere near the truth, it hadn’t happened yet. I’m not sure if I ever want that, I know for now that’s the last thing I want with Avril.
I must admit that I’ve thought about the possibility of me and Avril thousands of times. Every now and again when I’m with her, when she falls asleep next to me. I do find myself looking at her in a different way. Admiring everything about her, looking deep into her, watching her as she sleeps, wondering how anyone could ever lay a finger on her or want to cause her pain and believe me she’s no stranger to heartache, just like I’m not. Everyone whoever they maybe are like an open book, their pages ready to be torn.
“Ev, let’s go inside before we catch our death out here” she pulled onto my arm, leading the way and I carefully follow her footsteps. It wasn’t like following footprints in the snow. It was just natural, like I could see a pattern in her footsteps a pattern that would be different from any one else’s, that only I’d now the outline of.

Dee
03-31-2004, 09:28 AM
I really liked it. Keep it coming.

FallingDown
03-31-2004, 09:32 AM
Thanks and yea I'll try.

ShatteredStars
03-31-2004, 12:16 PM
That's a really great story so far lol. I love it! I just love the way you write, Brandon. Hope there's more soon!

FallingDown
03-31-2004, 12:41 PM
lol, yea I think I'll write more soon.. if you want.

ninny_23
03-31-2004, 05:17 PM
great chapter it's really sweet.

MorningStar
03-31-2004, 06:32 PM
I loved it...I hope you write more!

Crystal
03-31-2004, 06:53 PM
Beautiful. I can't wait to read more.

infamous
03-31-2004, 09:09 PM
wow that was amazing, ur just an incredible writer! can't wait to read more :)

AvrilandEvan22
04-01-2004, 05:09 PM
^What she said! This is awesome lol.

Elaine
04-03-2004, 08:46 AM
awesome!!! i'm lovin it!! can't wait for more!!

Crystal
04-03-2004, 10:23 AM
* Bump *.

FallingDown
04-03-2004, 10:30 AM
Lmao Crys. I've made a start on the next part.. so keep your hair on.

ninny_23
04-03-2004, 01:01 PM
Great! Can't wait until you post it!

FallingDown
04-05-2004, 10:24 AM
Ok, here you go.

Chapter 2 - No reason to breath

When we got inside I removed my jacket and Amy slipped hers off and I took a hold of it. The club wasn’t my favourite place to be, it just reminded me of a place to drown your sorrows.
I am happy but things always get to me and when there’s no one to turn too I can rely on a blank sheet of paper that stares at me hopelessly, waiting for me to fill it to give it meaning and purpose.
I write, many people see me as Avril’s guitarist, her best friend but I write. No one has ever seen anything that I’ve written. No one’s got that close to me yet, not even Avril. Not even she knew everything about me, she never saw the cuts. I cover them up well I guess, emotions are someting I've become accustomed to hiding away.

My eyes began searching for any sign of Avril and Ryan. I couldn’t see them through the crowd’s of people dancing the night away, cigarette smoke choking my lungs.
I hadn’t seen my best friend so much lately we hadn’t been hanging out the way we always had. The only time she had for me was when we had to write together and perform. Any spare time was taken away from us by Amy and Ryan. I love the time I spend with Amy but I start to miss the time I spend with Av. Is it so strange to miss someone even when their so close? That’s what it feels like sometimes. I guess I’m afraid of losing the closeness that we have, our relationship is like nothing I’ve know between a girl and a guy without it being sexual without any attraction or sparks flying.
I don’t even want to imagine life without Avril in it, becoming her guitarist has spiralled into something beautiful, something that feels perfect.
She doesn’t feel like a sister, or a girlfriend but I think I’ve found my soul mate my absolute best friend. I’d always shrug my shoulders when people would say you can be best friends with a girl and now I laugh at myself for not believing that. I know now that anything’s possible.
Me and Av have had our moments, when we haven’t been to found of each other but we always realise that we can’t stand being mad at each other. Everything we’ve ever have argued over, seems so minimal now. I know I could never see myself hurting her, breaking her not the way that she has been broken before.

Avril and Amy are the important pieces in my life. I don’t want to risk losing either of them. That’s a though I’m not found of either. Their people I’d die for, their the people I never want to hurt and If I ever do I’m deeply sorry.

I pushed my way through the people in the doorway bodies dancing up against each other, music echoing through the walls. I was still no closer to seeing Av anywhere.
We pushed our way through, my hand gripping Amy’s.
“Ev, do you want to tear my arm off?” Amy said, sounding out of breath.
“No, would you like me too?” she punched me softly and we made our way over to the table.
Amy sat herself down, while I made my way over to the bar. I sat upon the stool untill someone arrived infront of me.
"Hey Ev, what can I get you?" Laura smiled, staring at me. Her hair tied back losely, her hands running themselves across the bar top.
"Ev?"
"Sorry, Laura.. I drifted off"
"Your telling me" She laughed slightly. "So what can I get you?"
"The usual"
she nodded, turning away.
I turned to look over at Amy and my head hung in disappointment. She was sparking up a cigarette I hated her smoking. The damage she was causing herself, I don’t know why it bothered me so much, mostly everyone smoked, and even Avril did once in a while. She knew I hated it. I felt my face burning as I watched her put it up to her lips.

I then felt a hand touch my shoulder, a soft tapping that followed with a voice.

"Evan I'm not standing here all night" I looked up to a familiar face. Her eyes showing she was annoyed but as I looked up further into them, the storm inside them calmed.
"Sorry Laura, I'm in a world of my own tonight, maybe there's something in the air"
"Then if there is, you’re breathing in something different from everyone else"
"Yea I must be" I pulled the glasses towards me. "I'll catch you later" I said as I got up from the stool.
"You won't be able to recognise me later, let alone talk to me"
"I guess you have a point"
"Don't us girls always have a point"... She just smiled and I walked back to the table, where Amy was sitting. I got back to the table to find the cigarette burnt out in the ashtray.
I put the glasses down on the table, and gently pushed Amy's towards her. I stared down into the ashtray watching the embers burn and what was left to see of the cigarette smoke floating by. I then turned to Amy.
"I thought you were giving them up"
"Giving what up?" Her eyes looking for something to stare at, anything to avoid looking into mine. Whenever you confront someone about something, it’s the only thing they know how to do. They find themselves looking down at the floor, eyes pacing around the room doing anything to avoid looking into your eyes to await the expression that falls on your face.
I grabbed the ashtray and pushed it in front of her. She knew what I meant, I didn’t have to draw her a picture, it was just something she’d want to avoid talking about.
"Them, that's what"
"Evan, your not my f*cking dad, one cigarette won't kill me"
"Fine whatever" I didn’t want argue and she didn’t want to talk about it. After all I don’t want to act like some parent giving a lecture to it’s child, I was her boyfriend but it doesn’t mean I have to like it.
"Ev, I don't want another argument about this"
"Fine, I'm going to find Av"
"Yea, you do that"
I was about to get up, when I heard my name being screamed. Again another familiar voice, one I knew to well.
”Evan!!” Avril practically yelled, I could feel her voice echoing inside of me, I was feeling everything tonight.
To me it felt like the whole room paused, everything felt silent and dead, but that was just me, around me chaos and noise was poring out of each corner of the room. I turned to see Av heading over to us, holding on to Ryan’s hand.
“Hey Av” Amy replied.
“Amy, great to see you” Avril said, walking over to her. “I thought you guys were never coming”
Ryan, sat himself down, reaching over to Avril. “Av, come sit down”
Ryan was an ok guy, for now he was making Avril happy, for now. Avril pushed in-between me and Ryan; she was falling about the place, the both of them drunk already.
“What took you so long Ev” Avril said, tugging at my shirt.
“We were just watching a movie and stuff”
”That was my fault Av, I wanted to stay to watch the end before we came out” came Amy’s reply
A smirk quickly crawled upon avrils face, “Ah… its ok … I get it” she said, winking at me and cracking a smile
“Av, you have a dirty mind” I said back.
She just fell about laughing, Ryan shortly breaking into laughter with her. When she was drunk anything would send her off laughing, and I mean anything. Once she laughed there was no stopping her, until when we would get back to the hotel.
Avril would get to her I love you emotional drunken stage. Where she’d just let her tears pour out, not caring where they fell and she’d tell me she loved me and she’d just let all her emotions out. Sometimes there was never even anything for her to cry about and once she was exhausted from that she’d fall to sleep, her scent slowing fading as she drifted off. Well that’s what drink did to her, but it was never the drink talking. It was the real Av letting herself out, escaping.
To people she might seem like just any other teenager and in a way she is just that, she falls in love gets her heart broken, has me there to pick it up. I’ll always be there to hold her together. Sometimes I know I’ve tried to hard to do anything to make her smile, and in the end I’ve somehow managed to find her smile, even if it falls away again. Avril’s deep, she’s a deep girl. She holds emotions deep inside, she puts down the barriers around me but I can never open up to her, I always feel I’m not worthy or worth her time that I’m just a stupid guy. Nothing special but she always finds a way to show me that I am. Even if I don’t believe it.

Whilst I drifted of, which was all I seemed to be doing tonight I found that my eyes were half shut and I looked around and the table was empty. No Ryan or Av, and beside me no Amy.
The smell of cigarette smoke filled the room, I hadn’t touched my drink but the smell of alcohol bounced of the walls. I stared down into my drink, I didn’t want to go and find where av, Ryan or Amy had gone. I wanted to sit by myself, but I couldn’t think my thoughts constantly disturbed. Inside my thoughts were repeating over and over and jumping around, never sitting still I felt like a broken record that just keeps skipping never reaching the end. I was never reaching the end of my thoughts, something new would occupy my mind, and fresh and raw emotions would find their way inside me.

I looked up in front of me only to see Amy holding hands and dancing like a slut with some guy. I felt my face burning.Why was she dancing with some guy? Did she forget I was sitting her by myself?.
My first eurge was to cause a scene and even though I knew it wouldn’t do any good, I only saw red. My girlfriend dancing like some slut with some guy, what do you expect?.
I stormed over to where they were all over each other, my hand gripping tightly onto this guy’s shirt until I turned him around to face me.
“What the f*ck” he said.
“She’s my girlfriend, get the f*ck of her” I was nearly in his face. He stunk of drink and the smell of smoke stuck to him.
Amy, started yelling at me, pulling me away from him.
“Evan, we weren’t doing anything” she pleaded. I was even scaring myself.. getting so worked up.
“I can’t help it if she want’s a real man dude” he said, a smile plastered on his face. I wanted to wipe the smirk of it. He didn’t deserve to have it there.. who did he think he was, dancing up all over Amy, touching her.
“Just keep off her, ok”
“Evan, leave him alone” Amy said, tugging at my arm.
“What? Do you wanna hit me?”
“Don’t tempt me”
“Evan, for god sake” Amy screamed.
“Come on hit me, mommy’s boy”
I felt my hand moving towards his face, I couldn’t hold it back. Before I knew it I’d sent it into his face. I felt his bones shudder. My hand burning in pain. I hit him harder than I’d wanted too. He fell to the floor, holding onto his jaw.
“I said leave her” I said as I looked at him, nursing his jaw.
I turned back around to face Amy, and everyone’s eyes were on me. I felt like the bad guy. Amy looked at me like she was disgusted with me, like she even hated me.
“Amy, I’m sorry..”
”What the hell got into you Ev?”
”Amy, I don’t know you were just all over each other… what was I supposed to do?”
”Forget it Ev”
“Amy I…” I walked closer to her, but she moved away.
”Leave me alone” it was like she couldn’t bare to look at me. My heart sunk. I’d hurt her but not on purpose I didn’t mean for any of this. I just didn’t want her dancing up all over some guy when she’s my girlfriend.
Everything fell dead silent, everywhere I looked eyes were on me. People looking at me like I was some violent drunk.

“Ev, what’s your problem?” Came Avril’s voice. I turned to her.
I looked into her eyes and she looked scared as if she wasn’t looking at me but right through me as If I was a different person. I hated myself.
Avril said nothing else, she looked long and hard at me, but I broke away from her stare and she walked back over to Ryan. I was standing there in isolation. Amy, was helping the guy on the floor and I couldn’t stand being here anymore.
I looked at what I’d done, and I left alone. I walked outside and looked up at the stars, knowing that I suddenly had never felt so alone. I'd made the two people I cared about most, see a different side to me.
I took a deep breath and walked away from the club, walking away from everything with nothing but the vision of what I had just done, the looks upon Amy and Avril's face.

Muqaddas_Farishta
04-05-2004, 11:52 AM
Your writing is so beautiful, so well written, Brandon. I love the way you write. Keep it up!

FallingDown
04-05-2004, 11:56 AM
Thanks.

Artemis
04-05-2004, 02:16 PM
Both chapters are amazing. You're a great writer and you know how to describe things and make them seem beautiful. Can't wait for the next one.

FallingDown
04-05-2004, 02:24 PM
Don't make me aww Meg.. lmao.. Thanks. Glad you liked it.

ninny_23
04-05-2004, 02:27 PM
Awww, sad chapter. Great story!

FallingDown
04-05-2004, 02:31 PM
Thanks.

Crystal
04-05-2004, 03:03 PM
You know how much I love this story, Brandon, and that chapter was great! I'm excited to see what happens next.

Elaine
04-05-2004, 03:14 PM
wow that was awesome!! i can't wait for more!

FallingDown
04-05-2004, 03:15 PM
Thanks Crys and Elaine.

infamous
04-05-2004, 03:34 PM
aww wow brandon, that was chapter was beautiful. Its good to finally see a story in a band member's POV. It's different and you portray it perfectly. Can't wait for more!

MorningStar
04-05-2004, 03:39 PM
You are an amazing writer...that chapter was awesome!

FallingDown
04-05-2004, 03:59 PM
Thanks guys :P

ShatteredStars
04-05-2004, 07:46 PM
Yeah, like chris said..I like how you wrote it from Evan's pov and not Avrils. I don't think I've ever seen that before and that says something about you. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Great job, Brandon!

FallingDown
04-06-2004, 07:40 AM
Thanks... It doesn't really say anything about me lol. Glad you liked it.

gwen-rox
04-06-2004, 08:10 AM
wow thats great i love it!! keep it up

AvrilandEvan22
04-06-2004, 06:36 PM
That was an awesome chapter! I like it how it's from Ev's POV too lol. Can't wait for more! :D

FallingDown
07-20-2004, 05:18 PM
Here, bad mouth it.

mattylover
07-21-2004, 05:50 PM
omg i can't find any words good enouth for that stiry i love it i can't wait to read mroe

freak01
07-21-2004, 06:20 PM
Why has it been months and not been updated?