Life lost

[Tiffanie]

this is again another sad one...but oh well
enjoy it ne way k

"Life Lost"
A heart with nothing inside
its broke and has been forced to hide
a smile shattered
all because nothing mattered
eyes dark with pain
face looking so plain
what went wrong
it didnt take long
a life taken away
there's nothing anyone can say
its gone now lost in the past
i think everyone knew it wouldnt last

*october 16 2002*

[Snagg3r]

its a better sad one
its cool
your gettin better at writing happy sadder poems if that made sense



Last edited by snagg3r at Oct 16 2002, 07:58 PM

[Tiffanie]

lol...ya that makes perfect sense to me
and thanx :)
im glad to hear that im getting better hehe

[narrator]

Augghhh, Do I haaaave toooo...?
I know it said only if I want
Yay...and I don't know what to say except...
Stay gold

[Tiffanie]

thanx..actually i really like this one
i know its sad but think its one of my better ones