PDA

View Full Version : Upside


narrator
10-17-2002, 09:45 AM
To an arguement
That never existed
To this extent
That you insisted

That we never look away
That in all the time we called upon replay
A lack of good confliction cues
A partial to remain at this point
But then it falls away

To an upside
That I use as a sieve
All the parts aside
Then take away and live

But at long term loss
I forget, define and subvert the cost
Memory in submissive stance of what I reuse
A partial match to refine away from here
That's impossible to cross

From an agreement
That was never tested
It's always bent
I give up, I'm bested

But there's always a downside to that



Last edited by Self-Titled at Oct 16 2002, 09:08 PM

Tiffanie
10-17-2002, 09:48 AM
awwwww....
i really like this one
:)

Snagg3r
10-17-2002, 09:55 AM
i didnt understand it
but id give it 2 stars out of 100 stars muahahah

narrator
10-17-2002, 09:58 AM
Its about how I always ruin the upside of things

Snagg3r
10-17-2002, 09:58 AM
yeah you do that alot

Tiffanie
10-17-2002, 09:17 PM
awww hehe
well its still good
hey we should rate everyone's poems on here
like 10 being the best and i being the worst
what do you guys think???

oh and songs...oops hehe almost forgot



Last edited by punkgrrl2002 at Oct 17 2002, 08:15 AM