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Tiffanie
10-20-2002, 05:16 AM
"Time to go"
you see me cry
but do you know why
im hurt so bad
does it make you sad
my body wont last
it will be lost in the past
my life is going so slow
its time now for me to go
*october 18 2002*

"Let You Go"
just when i think i have let you go
you always have a new feeling to show
im so confused
my head is so abused
i love you
but there's nothing i can do
for you i have only tears
at one time, you took away all my fears
i want to let you go so bad
your always making me sad
i want to say to you goodbye
but when i begine to speak i start to cry
one i know
i'll find someone new and let you go
*october 18 &19 2002*

narrator
10-20-2002, 05:29 AM
The titles rhyme....is it just me or do well all seem to write about the same things a lot...I know when I look over my stuff, it just seems that way to me

Tiffanie
10-20-2002, 05:38 AM
ya i see that
i always seem to write about a sertain guy
or i always write about me

narrator
10-20-2002, 05:40 AM
I've yet to write a story where there is no violence or death...And I really do try to vary my poems but I've got like ten that sound the same as one...so I just take the best and leave the rest