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Tiffanie
10-24-2002, 07:15 AM
Eveytime i think im gonna be ok something or someone has to break me back down...i was doing so good....i was laughing for the first time in a really long time...then it happen..people had to break me back down...so i wrote this poem today and i just wanna say sorry that its not a happy poem...i dont think im ment to be happy...EVER

"Im leaving"
Someone please help me
my world is over cant you see
im dieing and no one seems to care
why is there never anyone there
i cant haddle all this pain
im gonna go insane
people hurt me so bad
they just dont care that they make me sad
they get joy from my sadness
i can no longer take all this madness
no one understands how much i want to leave
hurt and pain is all i ever reseive
no one will notice me not there by their side
i'll be gone and there will be no more reason for me to hide
all my pain will go away
im leaving and theres nothing anyone can do or say
*october 23 2002*




Last edited by punkgrrl2002 at Oct 23 2002, 06:19 PM

Snagg3r
10-24-2002, 07:32 AM
well its a nice sad poem
good job

narrator
10-24-2002, 08:52 AM
I'm releived I thought you were leaving....but your not so, I'm happy
And cheer up...just think of me wearing my big parachute pants and tank-top strutting around. And with my visor tilted and big goggles...think of that...yo!

MarieLove
10-24-2002, 08:56 AM
i like it very much