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Crystal
07-07-2004, 12:32 PM
Okay this is a story that Bebe and I have been working on for about a week. It's a short story about Avril and Evan. We hope that you guys like it!

Warning: This was written by two VERY boy crazy girls. lmao.

Exposed

Avril Lavigne was bored. She’d always hated the long hours on the tour bus, most of the time spent doing nothing. While she was excited about her mall tour and the chance to meet her fans, she hated travelling.

She lifted her head up when she heard a faint car crash noise. It was coming from the video game that Evan Taubenfeld, her lead guitarist, was playing as he sat on the floor in red plaid boxers. She drew her breath in, thinking about how hot he looked. But then again, Evan always looked cute.

With a smile, she walked over to him. “What are you playing?” she asked as she sat down, though all she could focus on were his baby blue eyes. They were the type of eyes that she could get lost in.

“Grand Theft Auto,” he replied, his tongue hanging out of his mouth as he stared in heavy concentration at the television screen. To him, video games were very serious. But she couldn’t stop staring at his tongue, wondering how it would feel all her over her body...

“Oh really. Well, Ev, I’m bored. Can you cure me?” Avril asked, slowly easing her way onto his lap and throwing the joystick across the room.

Evan winked at her. “Sure. Just show me how.” Gently, he picked her up and carried her over to the black leather couch. She lay down, giggling, and he got on top of her. His legs were on either side of her.

Biting her lip, she brought his neck down so their faces were only inches apart, then quickly brushed her lips against his. They both tingled all over as their tongues danced furiously.

“Like that,” she replied softly when they pulled away, aware now of her heavy breathing.

He kissed her roughly this time, a sloppy kiss. She was getting extremely excited as he pulled her white t-shirt over her head, revealing a lacy white bra that barely covered her breasts. He grinned as he looked her over, and was about to unhook the back when they both heard a loud knock. They were in the back section of the bus, which could be made private by closing a sliding wooden door.

“f*ck!” Avril yelled angrily. “Who is it?”

“It’s Shauna!”

Evan rolled off of Avril while she put her shirt on again, frustrated. He gave her a quick kiss in an attempt to make her feel better before going back to his video game.

“What do you want?” Avril asked, clearly annoyed, as Shauna walked in.

Shauna handed her a pile of posters. “I need you to sign these so a radio station can give them away to contest winners.”

After singing them as fast she possibly could, Avril asked, “Anything else? I was kind of busy.”

Shauna raised her eyebrows at Avril, glancing over at Evan. “Um, that’s all. What were you busy with?” She saw him blush slightly and asked, “Evan? What’s up?”

“Nothing,” Avril snapped. “Go schedule me some time off because I need it,” she demanded playfully, pointing for her manager to get out.

“It’s a mall tour, honey. Time off right now is impossible, ” Shauna remarked, shaking her head. But she took the obvious hint and left.

Avril looked over at Evan. “Damn, she killed the mood. I wanted to f*ck you really badly,” she pouted, sitting next to him again.

“Aw me too, but let’s just wait until the show’s over. The anticipation will build up so the sex’ll be good tonight.” He winked at her, knowing that it turned her on.

She sighed. “Ugh! Fine then. I’m gonna shower.” Her eyes met his and she started to giggle. “Don’t you wanna join me?”

“Av. Don’t do this to me. You know who tiny that bathroom is.”

“And I know that you can’t resist me,” she teased, standing up. “But yeah. I’ll see you later!”

She walked towards the washroom, leaving Evan staring after her. Gaping was more like it, actually. She had a perfect body and the cutest ass. He smiled to himself and went back to his video game.

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After an incredible performance, Avril and Evan grinned at each other. The fans in the audience clapped and cheered.

“We have to find a quiet place where we can be alone,” she whispered as the two of them made their way towards the tour bus. “I’ll meet you in the back closet in a few minutes.”

“That’s a storage closet!” Evan exclaimed, laughing. “You’re crazy.”

“Crazy and horny,” she replied with a grin. “I’ll throw all of the stuff onto the floor.” And she was off, determined to get there first without anyone seeing her.

When Avril was settled in, she sat on the hard floor of the small closet, the lights turned off. God, how long was he taking? They’d waited all day to be together, and she couldn’t wait a second more.

Evan slipped into the closet, shutting the door behind him. She opened her mouth to say something but he put his hand over it. “Shhh,” he whispered. “Someone’s gonna figure it out.” But even after telling her that, he still flicked on the tiny light, and then they could see each other.

“Hey,” she said softly, smiling as his hand reached underneath her top to massage her breast.

He noticed the look of pleasure that took over her face as his hands started to ease their way behind her back where he unclasped her bra. He gently took it off and held it up.

She grabbed it and threw it to the side. “Come on, Evan,” she begged, her hands moving down to undo his belt buckle. “Quit teasing.”

Evan felt himself tremble as Avril undid his belt. He closed his eyes as she slowly pulled his pants down, but when he felt her fingers rest on the waistband of his underwear, he opened them. “Now who’s being a tease?”

“I’m sorry, it’s just...I thought I heard something...” Shrugging it off, she pulled his boxers down as well, her lips just inches away from his cock. Looking up at him, she blew softly, his groans seeming to fill the tiny space. Aware of his pleasure, she took him in her mouth, alternating sucking and licking as he continued to moan softly.

Avril opened her eyes wide as she heard Shauna calling her name. She pulled away from him, fear churning inside of her. “Crap,” she said, a little too loudly, because there was a knock on the closet door.

“Avril? Are you in there?”

Evan put on his pants as fast as he could, while Avril threw her bra and shirt on. “One second,” she called, then pushed him behind a mop, throwing a towel over his body. She would have laughed at the funny sight if she hadn’t been so scared.

Avril rushed out of the closet, pulling her hair back and wiping her mouth a bit. “What do you want?” she asked, trying to pull herself together.

“I just wanted to let you know that your performance tomorrow is going to be delayed until six o’clock, not five,” Shauna said, frowning in confusion.

“Okay okay,” Avril said quickly, nodding a few times.

Shauna shook her head, still puzzled, and walked away.

“Evan come out!” Avril whispered loudly.

He came out, with the towel still on his head, and his other hand covering his crotch, even though his pants were on. He was shirtless and looking at him made her smile.

“Avril, you also have an-” Shauna said, sliding the door open, then blushed deeply. “Nice look there, Evan.” She covered her eyes and shut the door.

Evan blushed and went back into the closet.

“Avril, you have an interview before your performance. Don’t forget!” Shauan yelled from the other side of the door.

“Yeah, yeah, okay!” Avril shouted in reponse.

Evan opened the closet door, taking the towel off of his head as he sighed. “Damnit, why do we always get interrupted?”

She sighed as well. “I don’t know. But let’s continue our litte party in my hotel room later, alright?” She kissed him lightly on the cheek, sending gorgeous shivers up and down his spine.

“f*ck, I hate waiting,” he growled, holding her back towards him, pressing her hips into his crotch.

“Ev, don’t get me too excited,” she giggled. “I’m already dying as it is.”

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Anxious to get the night started, Avril and Evan stood in the hotel elevator impatiently.

“Aw Evan, I can’t wait any longer,” she said, slightly out of breath.

“Neither can I, Av,” he said, roughly kissing her shoulder as his hands roamed underneath her shirt.

She giggled. “Stop it! Let’s wait until we get into the hotel room.” But she wasn’t exactly sure she’d be able to wait.

Luckily for the two of them, they heard the ding on the elevator, and it stopped with a halt. Rushing out of there, the two ran to their destination, fumbling with the card key in an attempt to open the door as fast as possible. Finally managing to open the door, Evan threw it open while Avril grabbed him by his jean jacket and pressed her lips onto his. Like always, it was a very heated kiss.

Holding Avril’s waist tightly, Evan eased the two of them into the room and managed to stumble his way onto the bed. He hastily threw his jacket off while she lay down on the bed, kicking her shoes off. He bent down to kiss her softly, clothes being taken off in a frenzy. Within a matter of seconds, she was in her matching lacy black bra and underwear, and he was in his green plaid boxers.

She made a trail of kisses from his neck down to his lower stomach, pausing when her lips reached the waistband of her boxers. She looked up at him, encouraged by his nod, and slowly pulled down his boxers with her mouth. He responded with a quiet groan as he removed her underwear as well. Then he smiled as their lips met again while he gently massaged her breast. Running his thumb over her nipple, he noticed her arousal, aware of his own beating heart. How long had they waited for this moment? It felt unreal, but it was happening. And Evan was made even more aware of that upon hearing Avril moan, then laugh.

“Don’t be a tease!” she whispered, closing her eyes. She felt shivers all over her body, down to her toes even.

Evan paused before entry, giving her a sly grin at the mention of teasing her. After placing another kiss on her perfect lips, he was inside of her. Avril let out a cry of pleasure, which turned him on even more. She locked her legs around his back, running her hands over his bare skin, loving the feel of him. She’d wanted to taste him, feel him, for the longest time. The end result was as wonderful as she’d anticipated, as they’d both expected.

They came together, orgasms rocking both of their bodies in a rhythm all their own. It was the most beautiful melody, shaded in with passion and desire and lust. And love, of course.

When it was over, Avril let out a huge sigh. She looked over at Evan, who was breathing hard as well, and said, “Holy f*ck.”

“You’re pretty good, you know that?” he asked, shooting her his signature grin as he kissed her on the forehead. Reaching over to take her right hand in his, he thought about how well they seemed to fit together. It was like their bodies were made to be shaped into the other, creating something bigger than they’d ever known.

“You ain’t so bad yourself!” She moved closer to Evan, resting her head on his shoulder, allowing her turquoise eyes to flutter closed. They were both exhausted. With his arm around her waist, the two of them feel into an uninterrupted sleep, pastel dreams filling the atmosphere.

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As sunshine covered the hotel room at eight o’clock the next day, Avril lay awake, staring at Evan. He was even more beautiful than she’d thought before they had sex. The way his hair seemed streaked with a million shades of blonde made her smile, along with his gorgeous eyes.

When his eyes opened, he grinned at her, kissing her quickly. “Morning!”

“Morning, Ev,” she replied, placing her small hand on top of his rougher one. “You know...I’ve been thinking...we have a lot of chemistry, huh? And I think it would be a terrible waste if we didn’t recognize that...and take advantage of it.”

Evan laughed. She was adorable all the time, but she looked even cuter in the morning light, her head full of sleep. “And how shall we do that?”

“Well...” she started, running her hand over his smooth chest, “We should definitely make what happened yesterday a nightly occurance. I’d settle for it to be a weekly occurance, actually, Evan. It’s not a secret that we care about each other, right?”

“Right...”

“And I love you.”

Those words were music to his ears. Evan smiled widely and replied, “I love you too, Avril.” Pausing to think for a second, he joked, “So I’m not just sex to you?”

“Oh no!” she said, giggling. “You’re so much more.”

THE END.

whitney_m
07-07-2004, 12:48 PM
Guys....I love you.
Lmfao! This is awesome. So.....write more..now. Dirrty minds tsk tsk. lol

FollowMe
07-07-2004, 12:59 PM
lol. Interesting story.........

Write MORE!!


wait nvm that was the end of the story lol

what_ever
07-07-2004, 01:44 PM
holy....... omfg AMAZING

dirtttyyyyyyyy lmao

that was awsome guys <3@it

TelescopeEyes
07-07-2004, 02:15 PM
Lmfao that was great! awesome job guys!

balooie
07-07-2004, 02:49 PM
that was hot! that has got to be the best sex scene between avri and evan EVER!

derycksmyhero
07-07-2004, 03:33 PM
Wow you know coming from you two...especially Bebe...this doesn't surprise me. Lmfao, great fic you two. Very dirrty.

freak01
07-07-2004, 03:48 PM
oooh...sex....

lmao.

MorningStar
07-07-2004, 03:50 PM
holy god...that was...I thought that was great! lol, very nice.

Crystal
07-07-2004, 04:14 PM
Thanks for all of the feedback, everyone! lmao Bebe is very dirrty but I love her!

Dee
07-07-2004, 04:15 PM
That was dirrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrttttttttttttttttttttyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyy

Thank you so much for writing this short story. I hope more stories will come from you. Long, short, with or without sex scenes I don't care even though stories with sex scenes are...well you know.............................................. .....
So amazing...So great and wonderful

It's good we get our needs of Av and Ev sex scenes fulfilled by you and others.

Keep up with the great writing. Thank you once again for an awesome story...

PaintedNails
07-07-2004, 04:59 PM
Ahhhhh that was just...that made my day lmao. You gotta love sex scenes with Av and Ev, espcially one written by you and Bebe. That was quite dirrtty ..and great! hehe...

mattylover
07-07-2004, 07:33 PM
that was gd i wish there was more to it but it was gd

XxInnocentAngel
07-09-2004, 07:29 PM
That was amazing and hot and....WOW!

Bebe
07-09-2004, 08:53 PM
uh i know how to do this lmfao. thank you everybody for reading this story written be the fabulous writer crystal and me. it's nice to know you took time out of your busy schedule, when instead you could've been in the lobby, or the anything you want section or what not. anywho, thank you all. crystal was tons of fun to write with because she knows how to horninize everything up lmfao. thank you again.

Crystal
07-09-2004, 08:56 PM
^ LMFAO. Omg Bebe I love you!

PaintedNails
07-09-2004, 08:57 PM
Both you and Crystal know how to horninize people lmfao.

Crystal
07-09-2004, 09:04 PM
lol! Whenever she wrote something I'd add a bit to it. Or horn it up, as Bebe so nicely put it.

PaintedNails
07-09-2004, 09:08 PM
Lmfao! Well I'm glad you did! It made it all the better.

Crystal
07-09-2004, 09:11 PM
lol thank you! We'd been talking about writing a sex story for a while.

PaintedNails
07-09-2004, 09:18 PM
Lmao I'm glad you did! You should write another!

Crystal
07-09-2004, 09:30 PM
Maybe we will! lol.

ninny_23
07-10-2004, 02:08 AM
lmao Aww, you guys. You're making me blush from this story. Dirty rockheads.

Dee
07-10-2004, 04:41 AM
Yeah, write another one.

PaintedNails
07-10-2004, 09:05 PM
That would be brilliant if you guys did. We all can't have enough sex scenes with Av and Ev lmao

ninny_23
07-11-2004, 03:07 PM
No we can't... At least the Sex Scene Club can't. ;)

PaintedNails
07-11-2004, 07:41 PM
Lmfao and who is the Sex Scene Club exactly?

ninny_23
07-11-2004, 09:10 PM
*cough* Me and my boys of course!

Crystal
07-11-2004, 09:15 PM
Yeah...I'd like to know that too. lol.

AvrilandEvan22
07-12-2004, 02:07 PM
Roflmfao guys..lmfao...damn it I want more!! Very dirrty. Roflmfao. It made my day though.

PaintedNails
07-12-2004, 03:23 PM
Lmao Nancy. You and Evan, you mean.

Amanda
07-12-2004, 03:47 PM
ahaha great story gurls ..

sk8andRockoN
07-14-2004, 11:18 PM
Hmm... um, I don't really know what to say... lol... well, it was written well...

Crystal
07-15-2004, 09:08 AM
Thanks Amanda!

lol Molly...

infamous
07-17-2004, 09:56 PM
Lmao, i was cracking up while reading it. Both Av and Ev are so blunt. It's like "Lets go have sex" ..lmfao.

Agreed that it was well written though.

myhappyending
07-22-2004, 12:15 PM
wow... absolutely amazing... *speechless*

Crystal
07-22-2004, 12:37 PM
lol thank you.

FallingDown
07-22-2004, 12:50 PM
Well....

Crystal
07-22-2004, 01:25 PM
Well what?

scarypuffringo
07-22-2004, 02:50 PM
Hi, Crystal! Hi, Bebe! I just finished reading the first chapter of this story. What do I have to say about it? Well... It's good, really good. You guys are great writers. But... There was supposed to be a warning or something. Things got a little too hot for Avril and Evan in this story. :lol: Awesome job. I'll read the other chapters later tonight. K?

Keep the good stuff coming girls!

Gotta jet!


EDIT: Okay, I just foud out that there are no other chapters... DUMB of me! You girls rock! Love the story. I was kinda surrpsied, though... :P

FallingDown
07-22-2004, 02:56 PM
Originally posted by Crystal@Jul 22 2004, 10:25 AM
Well what?
Very, exposed.. shall we say. :rolleyes:

myhappyending
07-23-2004, 06:23 AM
hornized... bebe, yur quite a character. lol...

myhappyending
07-23-2004, 06:24 AM
rawr, im accidentally posting twice.. i cant figure out how to delete posts...
:(

SORRY GUYS

ninny_23
07-23-2004, 01:44 PM
Well, no one can delete their own post, except for the selected few who I will not name because they won't write a sex story.