This mind of mine

[sSwiNg]

This is like my first English poem, so don't flame me please, plus I'm feeling down :no:

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There's something in my head and that just won't get out
I hate it, like I hate everyone around me
There's something real nasty I want to scream out loud
I hate it, I want to run and flee

There's something in my head that's making me sad
I hate it, everybody just leave me alone
There's something about my life that makes me feel bad
I hate it, because it's forcing me to moan

And as long as I don't know what it is.
There is something about life that I miss.
I'm not lonely because I got my girl
But when we're together it gets very still
She knows there's something wrong
From the day this thing came along
But if we do not speak
Our love will slowly leak
Till solved, I will pretend I'm fine
It is killing me this mind of mine

[Tiffanie]

hey i think your poem is very good...and there is alot of emotion and feeling in it...thats what makes it so good...keep up the good work :)

[sSwiNg]

Thanks :)
I've read some of your poems to (on your site) really like those

[Tiffanie]

aww well thanx so much for checking out my site....hope to read more from you :)

[sSwiNg]

Same here

[Tiffanie]

i update my poetry site all the time so ne time you wanna read a new poem by me just go there and check out the new updated section
:) :)

[sSwiNg]

I'll sure do when I have the time, keep on the writing girl :)

[Tiffanie]

thanx :):)

[Dryve Thru Romance]

awesme poem! keep ^ the good work!

[narrator]

cheer up...buy some porn