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i_am_canadian
11-01-2002, 11:27 AM
Close Your Eyes
06.15.2000

I loved you from the moment I met you
I think of you every waking moment of my day
I love you in every way

Close your eyes
And let us be together forever
Close your eyes
A place where reality can't cut like a razor

Others warn us as to the hardships that lay ahead
The difficulties that we will face
It is even obvious to me
That our love was not meant to be

But when we are together
Nothing else seems to exist
You can take away all of my problems
With just a single kiss

And now we've been torn apart
But you know that you'll always be in my heart
For as time passes me by
All I see is your face in the night sky

But if you'll just close your eyes
Together again we will be
Close your eyes
And flooding back are the memories

They say its better to have loved and lost
Than never having loved at all
Sometimes I'm not too sure
But know that my love is forever

Just close your eyes
And together again we will be
For eternity...

MarieLove
11-01-2002, 11:43 AM
wow i really love it, good job boy!!

Tiffanie
11-01-2002, 09:40 PM
awww how cute
i think its so good
:) :)

i_am_canadian
11-16-2002, 11:58 PM
thanks guys.

honestly i feel that its a bit weak in some parts, but hey, i wrote this when i was 14 so i don't really care. :P

Tiffanie
11-17-2002, 01:40 AM
its good..no worries :)

JasoN
11-17-2002, 02:54 AM
rock on dude. narly. LOL. its soo..emotional! i like it. :)

luckyducky
11-17-2002, 01:20 PM
aww thats real good!! :)