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narrator
11-03-2002, 10:18 AM
There’re some things I want to say
I’ve tried too hard to find another way
There’re some things I need to do
Take it out we’re through. It’s true?

Up and down
Call me out
Making mistakes
That’s what I’m about

So when I tell you that I’m sorry
Could you stop and really hear me
You already know this I’m not sorry
I just want to say that I lost a part of me

Slide it out
Call me down
Walking away
You won’t hear a sound

Talk me down
Wear me out
Tell me off
That’s what I’m thinking about

Under my skin
In my head
Never again
Not in my bed

So when I told you I was sorry
Did you read or really hear me?
I can’t explain the way I feel
I just want to say its getting better still

There’s a part of me its you
So new I don’t believe its true
Something underneath my feet
Step back and look, we’ll probably never meet

Tiffanie
11-04-2002, 08:36 AM
omg i love this
man there are just no words for this one except
WOW
man this is one of your best for sure
keep up the great work cause your stuff is amazing
:) :) ~Tiffie~

narrator
11-04-2002, 08:39 AM
hummmmm

Tiffanie
11-04-2002, 08:40 AM
hehe i really really like this one alot....its my favorite one...man if ne one doesnt like this then they have to be crazy cause jeesh its so awsome
lol i could go on forever about how much i love this hehe

narrator
11-04-2002, 08:42 AM
I wonder who I wrote it for........er....nevermind

Tiffanie
11-04-2002, 08:48 AM
tell me please?
im very interested
i love this
PLEASE

narrator
11-04-2002, 08:51 AM
I dont think I should...I don't think that 'person' would want me to say...but I dont know

Tiffanie
11-06-2002, 12:09 PM
i still love this one
lol
its great

vatjui
11-06-2002, 12:11 PM
this reminds me of a book I'm reading. All of you have to read Losing Julia!

Tiffanie
11-06-2002, 12:13 PM
whats it about?

vatjui
11-06-2002, 12:18 PM
war, love, regret, age........total vatjui book