on my own

[Tiffanie]

"On my own"
pain inside
forcing me to hide
tears i cry
never understanding why
im hurting people around me
and all because they just cant see
i hurt so bad
cause im always sad
i never smile
always full of deniyal
no words i say
i keep them all locked away
why cant they see
what goes on around me
i try to push it away
but forever it will stay
taking me under
leaving me with so much wonder
im in this alone
forever on my own
*november 4 2002*

[MarieLove]

wow..... i can relate it so much.... keep writing grrl!

[Snagg3r]

thats one of your best

[Tiffanie]

lol...thanx guys im so glad you like them
but seriously tho i didnt think this one was good at all
and i definitly will keep writing...its all i can and know how to do :)

[narrator]

you could write some dope ass lyrics and bust some rhymes...and move your hand up and down over your head, and then say "yo" and "know what I'm saying" a lot

[Tiffanie]

hahahaha
why do ya say that???????/
thats so funny hehhehehe

[MarieLove]

Originally posted by punkgrrl2002@Nov 12 2002, 11:01 PM

but seriously tho i didnt think this one was good at all

what????????? you lie!

[ReeFeRGuRL]

this one is great! i should print em all out and start my punkgrrl2002 poem collection..hehe. :)

[Tiffanie]

lol that would be cool

[ReeFeRGuRL]

I know!! hehe thas what iam talkin about! lol

[JasoN]

punkgrrl- its not like u could write one any better so shutup till u can prove us wrong.

[Tiffanie]

alrighy then

[luckyducky]

thats awesome....i didnt think that anyone felt the same way i did until now....hmm its great to know ur not the only person in the world with all ur emotions bottled up....keep up the good work and dont ever stop writing!! :yes:

[Tiffanie]

awww thank youso much
and nope your not alone....no one is alone
just when you think you are you always find someone out there who is just like you