song/poem by here2eatU

[JasoN]

k i wrote this one day when i was feeling really down and out. and..yea so here it is..

Look into my soul
All youll find is a hole
The confusion is deeper
But the love has grown steeper
The problems will come
As fast they will go
This life has many faces
Never know which one will show

Im in a dark place
A star lost in space
Dont know where to turn
What will this hate burn?

Thick walls surround me
In my mind they dont exist
No oxygen to breathe
The hate in me assist
Sometimes I start to feel
That I can make it through
Than this life finds me
And beats me like a shrew

Im in a dark place
A star lost in space
Dont know where to turn
What will this hate burn?

I havent learned a thing
I will not change a thing
I am the way I am
Fuck your approval
In the end nothing matters
Fuck everything youve said
Because were all the same
We all turn up dead

Im in a dark place
A star lost in space
Dont know where to turn
What will this hate burn?... My soul




so yea.. its kinda sad..and kinda true. YAY
B)

[Pinky]

dude.... that rocks big time! seriously, this is like some of the best stuff i've read from other ppl. if this was a song, that's all i'd listen to. rock on B)

[JasoN]

THANKS! yay im glad u liked it. it was kinda depressing so i didnt know if many people would like it. haha. but thank you!! B) :)

[Pinky]

your very welcome mr.
i loved it, it's kinda dark and all, but it's like.. i can relate to you, and i can see how much feeling you put into it, so, totally, it kicks ass!

[JasoN]

aw well that makes me feel good. i love when people can relate to my shit. lol. i mean my songs. AWESOME! :)

[ReeFeRGuRL]

Good job J..I think youve shown me that one before...anyways..yeah well done!

[JasoN]

haha. yea babe youve seen that one before. but i like it so i decided to post it so everyone can see! YAY B)

[ReeFeRGuRL]

well good! cuz its a great piece of writing.. :D