suckysk8erchick
11-19-2002, 10:12 AM
k i wrote this last year it's the first poem/song i had ever written. it's pretty lame but i appreciate ne comments:
DONE FOR:
VERSE 1:
There's hundreds of things that i could say to hopefully make you come back to me
I've been sad since you left me
And i can remember everything you say but it doesn't make sence to me
And i know breaking up with you was wrong but you sould give me a reason why you're breaking my heart
BRIDGE:
Was it my actions that made you turn away
That made you walk away and not talk to me
If I could just think of a was to make you come back to me
CHORUS:
Been walkin round
Thinking of you all the way
I've been trying my best to stay strong and not cry
I've driven my self crazy wishing we were together
VERSE 2:
I don't want to make fake felling and say that im not sad
But if there is someway you'll forgive me, wont you please tell me soon
The day's are going by so slowly now, guess that's my life now that you're gone
BRIDGE"
So I'll just hang around and find something to think about
To take my mind from wandering back to you
And itruly know that someday we'll be together again
Please say that's true
CHORUS
VERSE 3:
What can I do if I can't be with you
Tell me who will I turn into, who will I be
Now that we are split apart, do you still like me at all
Baby why cant you see that Im suffering from you
I know it sucks but please reply
:(
DONE FOR:
VERSE 1:
There's hundreds of things that i could say to hopefully make you come back to me
I've been sad since you left me
And i can remember everything you say but it doesn't make sence to me
And i know breaking up with you was wrong but you sould give me a reason why you're breaking my heart
BRIDGE:
Was it my actions that made you turn away
That made you walk away and not talk to me
If I could just think of a was to make you come back to me
CHORUS:
Been walkin round
Thinking of you all the way
I've been trying my best to stay strong and not cry
I've driven my self crazy wishing we were together
VERSE 2:
I don't want to make fake felling and say that im not sad
But if there is someway you'll forgive me, wont you please tell me soon
The day's are going by so slowly now, guess that's my life now that you're gone
BRIDGE"
So I'll just hang around and find something to think about
To take my mind from wandering back to you
And itruly know that someday we'll be together again
Please say that's true
CHORUS
VERSE 3:
What can I do if I can't be with you
Tell me who will I turn into, who will I be
Now that we are split apart, do you still like me at all
Baby why cant you see that Im suffering from you
I know it sucks but please reply
:(