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Tiffanie
11-21-2002, 07:00 AM
"I'll Love You Forever"
what do i do
when all that matters to me is you
what can i say
no matter you do i'll love you anway
your the one that took my heart
and yes you did tare it apart
but i sill love you
i love everything that you do
you can always make me smile
that face of your makes me stay around awhile
you can also make me cry
and i'll never understand why
everytime i think im over you
i look at you and see that its not really true
i see that presious face
the whole world i wish i could erase
leaving you here with me
your face i want to forever see
i know deep down im never gonna stop loving you
believe me its true
i know we'll never be together
but i know i'll love you forever
*november 20 2002*

Snagg3r
11-21-2002, 07:53 AM
hey punkgrrl you got fix grammar in that but all in all its agood poem

MarieLove
11-21-2002, 08:12 AM
wow grrl i love this one, good work!!

Pinky
11-21-2002, 09:09 AM
yes, the grammar needs correctin, but it's a great work

suckysk8erchick
11-21-2002, 10:00 AM
that was amazing keep it up