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Jay Ell
11-23-2002, 02:06 PM
The rain pours over me
cold reality

I see a picture
an image from before
and I can't take it anymore
the feelin's so hard to ignore and I
see you.
But only in my mind

It feels so lonely
although I'm not alone
I feel so empty
but full of unfufilled dreams.

the rain now mingles with the tears,
the tears that fall for you.
for love that's lost and can't be found
is love forever lost.

I watch the sun go down now
and I can't help but think of you
sapphire eyes, as blue as the skies

But skies turn gray and you
fell away.

Danzig
11-26-2002, 04:07 AM
IT STINKS !!!

JiveMonkey
11-26-2002, 05:40 AM
You are simply the most positive character I have ever met Danzig.

Pinky
11-26-2002, 07:03 AM
Jay Ell, that poem/song rocked! although you should have posted it on the FanFic/Creative Writing Forum, and Danzig, get a life. that poem rocked.

Danzig
11-26-2002, 09:04 PM
i was doing an impresion of the critic DUH

JasoN
11-27-2002, 07:56 AM
duh duh smoke a bud. haha hehe and shit :)