StIcKy_nOtE15
01-31-2005, 04:08 PM
ok now this is angels with dirty faces except differ name and its so much better oh and less confusment. ive deleted the flashbacks so good. and changes wont show until the third chapter. now this story contains jelousy, murder ,pregnancy, and so much more, so enjoy.
Chapter 1
''Evan stop it!'' Avril shrieked with laughter. Evan loved Avril. He knew that one way to her was by tickeling her.
'' Alright fine but really i.....'' Evans voice traveled off into the distance. He was too transfixed on Avril. To him Avril was like a
pill , He must always have more to keep from getting ill.Then again Avril saw Evan in a completely different way. She only saw him as a friend. When it came to girls Evan was always a little shy especially when it came to Avril. ''Hey Avril?'' ''Yeah'' ''I wrote a song, wanna hear it?'' ''Sure'',
'' Till death do us part in sweet vicious love,
I bleed only for you, I bleed only for you
We can only dream in sweet, sweet misery
Blissfully b...reathing and dreaming of the day
That we all fall to pieces , Broken and shattered
Like shards of glass that cant be put together ''
''Well thats all that ive written so far '' ''Who is it about?'' ''What do you mean?'' '' Well is it about real experiences, an idea , a feeling? What is it about?'' ''Uh well?'' Evan found it a little bit harder to swallow at that point. Avril had obivously had'nt gotten the message that it was for her. '' Nice try though'' Evan thought to him self. Maybe next time. ............ ''Oh god! I look like a wind up doll in Maxim Mag. today'' Avril sputterd out. ''Oh? Well a very hott wind up doll then.'' Evan didnt mean to say that out loud. "Omg Evan, you're such a fu....'' Avril comment was quickly cut off when her Cell phone rang. ''Hello, hey Lenny . Hey yea totally. Sure when? Ok then bye'' Avril hung up the Cell phone. Evan wonderd who it was that that Lenny guy. He had never heard of him till now.
Evan just lay on the couch, pondering on what to do. He really wanted to ask Avril out but he was so unsure if she would
feel the same as he did her. He kinda knew some info about Lenny and he kinda wondered if she liked Lenny. Lenny was perfect. Lenny had the most amazing Blueish-greenish eyes ever. He played guitar, skateboarded. He listened to marilyn manson, The Rasmus, H.I.M, Linkin Park, Sum 41, and many more. He looked alot like Bam Margera. Even his hair resembled that of Bam's. He was all that and a bag of chips.
Evan thought that Avril was crazy for Lenny. He was so unsure. One thing that he was sure about though was that he loved Avril. He just had to be with her.
Avril was just now waking up . Evan on the other hand had been up for a while now makeing breakfast for the two of them. ''Oooo something smells good Evan.'' '' Thanks ive been up for a while making......'' But his voice was cut off by the ringing of Avrils cell phone. '' Hey Lenny was up? Oh really cool! yes i would love to. So at 3:oo pm today. Ok see ya then bye.'' Avril said that and hung up her Cell phone. After Evan had herd that little call , He knew that there was possibly no chance to be with her.
Chapter 1
''Evan stop it!'' Avril shrieked with laughter. Evan loved Avril. He knew that one way to her was by tickeling her.
'' Alright fine but really i.....'' Evans voice traveled off into the distance. He was too transfixed on Avril. To him Avril was like a
pill , He must always have more to keep from getting ill.Then again Avril saw Evan in a completely different way. She only saw him as a friend. When it came to girls Evan was always a little shy especially when it came to Avril. ''Hey Avril?'' ''Yeah'' ''I wrote a song, wanna hear it?'' ''Sure'',
'' Till death do us part in sweet vicious love,
I bleed only for you, I bleed only for you
We can only dream in sweet, sweet misery
Blissfully b...reathing and dreaming of the day
That we all fall to pieces , Broken and shattered
Like shards of glass that cant be put together ''
''Well thats all that ive written so far '' ''Who is it about?'' ''What do you mean?'' '' Well is it about real experiences, an idea , a feeling? What is it about?'' ''Uh well?'' Evan found it a little bit harder to swallow at that point. Avril had obivously had'nt gotten the message that it was for her. '' Nice try though'' Evan thought to him self. Maybe next time. ............ ''Oh god! I look like a wind up doll in Maxim Mag. today'' Avril sputterd out. ''Oh? Well a very hott wind up doll then.'' Evan didnt mean to say that out loud. "Omg Evan, you're such a fu....'' Avril comment was quickly cut off when her Cell phone rang. ''Hello, hey Lenny . Hey yea totally. Sure when? Ok then bye'' Avril hung up the Cell phone. Evan wonderd who it was that that Lenny guy. He had never heard of him till now.
Evan just lay on the couch, pondering on what to do. He really wanted to ask Avril out but he was so unsure if she would
feel the same as he did her. He kinda knew some info about Lenny and he kinda wondered if she liked Lenny. Lenny was perfect. Lenny had the most amazing Blueish-greenish eyes ever. He played guitar, skateboarded. He listened to marilyn manson, The Rasmus, H.I.M, Linkin Park, Sum 41, and many more. He looked alot like Bam Margera. Even his hair resembled that of Bam's. He was all that and a bag of chips.
Evan thought that Avril was crazy for Lenny. He was so unsure. One thing that he was sure about though was that he loved Avril. He just had to be with her.
Avril was just now waking up . Evan on the other hand had been up for a while now makeing breakfast for the two of them. ''Oooo something smells good Evan.'' '' Thanks ive been up for a while making......'' But his voice was cut off by the ringing of Avrils cell phone. '' Hey Lenny was up? Oh really cool! yes i would love to. So at 3:oo pm today. Ok see ya then bye.'' Avril said that and hung up her Cell phone. After Evan had herd that little call , He knew that there was possibly no chance to be with her.