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Tiffanie
11-27-2002, 09:04 AM
"Depression"
I can remember when i was young
nothing mattered
i didnt feel any pain
always a smile on my face
never had any fears
an now
im 18 years old
and the most important thing to me
is dieing
what kind of life is this
i shouldnt be this way
i shouldnt hurt the way that i do
i'll never understand what went wrong
what or who pushed me down
i'll never know the reason for my pain
i do know that it cant go on
i cant keep going like this
im only 18
im to weak to stand tall
one more push
and that will be the end
ive been hurt so many times
its so unfair
and what hurts the most
is the people hurting me
are the people i love
most of them dont know
but those who do
try to help me
and some try to kill me
depression
it took away my life
took away everything
has broke me down
im done now
done with my life
whats the point in living
when the day finally comes
when its time for me to say goodbye
i only hope there will be someone there
someone i know who has always cared
i hope for people surrounding me
people i love
all the ones who were never there when i was alive
they'll look at my pale white face
they'll see whats left of me
they'll see and feel what i went through
they'll feel my pain
as they watch them burry me
they'll say goodbye
watch me go
whip away their tears
then walk away and forget who i was
they'll move on with their lives
years from now no one will know who or what i was
i'll be totally gone
i'll be a distant memory
18 years old
some may say its to young to die
but when someone is in this much pain
and dont go a day without crying
18 may then seem like the best time
i was 18
i lost my life
depression
dont let it get you lost
dont end up like me
say your prayers
hope for better days
think of me and you'll know
depression can eat you alive
it can be your biggest fear
please just hold on tight
dont lose your life
at the age of 18
i lost mine
*november 25 2002*

JasoN
11-27-2002, 11:39 AM
aww that was wicked! and im sure lots of us can relate to those lyrics :yes: very nice!!!! :D

MarieLove
11-27-2002, 11:56 AM
*cries*

JasoN
11-27-2002, 11:59 AM
haha well its not THAT bad. :lol: ... i mean emotion wise. :)

MarieLove
11-27-2002, 12:01 PM
^i cry cuz i relate it sooo much.... this grrl is so awesome...her poetry is amazing....

ReeFeRGuRL
11-27-2002, 12:30 PM
I like that. yeah i can definitly relate to those words.....means alot that you posted those gurly!!

i like the way you wrote it...ive written a few like that...i never even try to ryme..i juss go off about how iam feeling...

Great job!

JasoN
11-27-2002, 01:04 PM
yeah sometimes trying to rhyme can take the fun outta writing what u feel :yes:

Tiffanie
11-27-2002, 09:16 PM
ya i agree...i was just in a really bad mood and everything was getting to me and i didnt wanna try and ryme at all so i just wrote it...and im glad that you all like it...but im not glad that some of you can relat to it cause feeling like this is the worst thing in the world and i hate the thought of others feeling the way that i do...i hope the best for all of you :)
"Always smile even when it hurts"
~tiffie

JasoN
11-28-2002, 12:46 AM
^^ aww thas so sweet. im sorry YOURE feeling that way. but juss try not to let all the shit in life get to you. juss take it one day at a time. whatever happened in the past is exactly that..in the PAST. :yes:

MarieLove
11-28-2002, 04:55 AM
i relate it cuz something like that happened to me like...hummm.... last year.

JasoN
11-28-2002, 05:03 AM
^really? aw sorry to hear that. y'know a few years ago..shit used to always get me down. but then one day i juss....stopped caring. i mean im not heartless or anything..but juss all the bullshit from everyday life doesnt get to me as much anymore. kinda hard to explain. haha

Jay Ell
11-28-2002, 05:17 AM
I can almost relate. :(

JasoN
11-28-2002, 05:40 AM
aw this thread is depressing me. haha jk. well i hope yall can eventually juss learn to...i dont know...live. haha. YAY :P

ReeFeRGuRL
11-28-2002, 06:15 AM
awww I LOVE YOU GUYS!!!!!! hehehe

yeah a year ago i was in the same spot...but now ive learned so much and i feel great. Your so amazing punkgrrl..i think we all could learn alot from you!!!

Luv you!!! :D

JasoN
11-28-2002, 07:57 AM
awww thas sweet! yay wicked kitties! meow

Tiffanie
11-28-2002, 09:16 PM
well thanx...thats makes me feel alot better
ReeFeRGuRL you are awsome to....thanx so much for all the nice things you say
thanx to everyone :)

ReeFeRGuRL
11-28-2002, 11:58 PM
hehe! aww!! :D gurl..its np!!! iam juss pumped that you post your wicked shit...cuz i know alot of us here really enjoy reading your stuff...

thank YOU!!! :D

Tiffanie
11-29-2002, 06:28 AM
:) :)