Plastic Entrails

[narrator]

There was a silhouette of the moon behind the shattered sightline
And the process of shutting down was slow
There was a bitter taste of waiting within the streetlights outside
But the words I said were nothing you would know

Joke around then watching me
And then I fell, then I fell, then I fell
Joke around and cause a sound
And then I fell, then I fell, then I fell

Reverberating across the empty halls
The water slowed within me and the pain succeeded
Noting the hands on the clock at the dead hour
I would wait and wait, only to wait some more

So many perfect pains around
And then I fell, then I fell, then I fell
Too many things unattained, found
And then I fell, then I fell, then I fell

Dancing with my tortured mind
I can’t get well, can’t get well, can’t get well
The more I wait the less I find
I can’t get well, can’t get well, can’t get well

I was waiting for sleep
But now I can cope without it
I serve the pain that comforts me
I know I fell, I can’t get well
You can tell, then I fell, one foot in hell

[Jay Ell]

O_O Utterly cool man.

Do you think up tunes for your poems/lyrics?

[narrator]

This has a tune because it is a song but my poems don't...its hard to tell the difference, I know

[Tiffanie]

where do you come up with the stuff you write
like some of the lines in this one are amazing
:) :)

[ReeFeRGuRL]

dude..your writing kicks ass...your so fuckin talented!!! I always read your shit..it rocks!!
what are some of your fave bands btw?

[narrator]

Originally posted by punkgrrl2002@Dec 1 2002, 11:38 AM
where do you come up with the stuff you write
like some of the lines in this one are amazing
:) :)
I usually just picture what I'm writing about and the words come...yeah...its weird

And my fav bands are Bad Religion, As Friends Rust, The Used, NOFX, Jurrasic 5, Boy Sets Fire, Strung Out, Kid Dynamite, No Use For a Name, Nirvana, Ignite, Descendents, Del the Funky Homosapian, Rancid, CCR, Discount, Avril Lavigne, Autopilot Off and Led Zeppelin

theres some more and then some more

[ReeFeRGuRL]

sweet i like alot of the same shit as you...you have good taste in music!

[narrator]

My music tastes salty