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Tiffanie
12-02-2002, 09:33 AM
now that im looking over this poem its kinda weird...what do you guys think?? :confused:

"Im Ok"
i show no fear
i know what im doing
i feel its right
i show no mercey
i'll be alright
stop your worrieing
im gonna be ok
just close your eyes
just look away
it'll be over so fast
no fear
no worry
im ok
*november 30 2002*

narrator
12-02-2002, 09:43 AM
its not weird, its good and somesuch praise

fooeleven
12-04-2002, 11:20 PM
i like

Tiffanie
12-05-2002, 08:19 AM
thanx :)

JasoN
12-05-2002, 09:47 AM
i like it too. keep it up

Tiffanie
12-05-2002, 09:25 PM
well i will i guess heehee

Dryve Thru Romance
12-05-2002, 10:38 PM
i liked it.

Tiffanie
12-06-2002, 12:24 PM
:)

ReeFeRGuRL
12-06-2002, 03:13 PM
i loved it! :D

Tiffanie
12-06-2002, 09:59 PM
im glad...i really think its weird tho...but when i look at some older stuff i have wrote i always think they are weird and sometimes i cry when i read some cause they are just sad and its hard to think i was feeling those feelings when i wrote them