Hidden

[Tiffanie]

"Hidden"
Whats hidden away
is what needs to stay
im angry
why cant they see
i keep so much hidden inside
all because someone told me to hide
i cant see the light
theres no one there to hold me tight
im hidden
and thats a given
is there really a me
if so why cant i see
hidden and gone
the brightest sun never shawn
hidden is the past
something that never would last
its all a mystery
and nothing can touch me
hidden
me through think and thin
am i gone
there's no one to lean on
its over and done
there's no place to run
hidden away
so there's nothing more i can say
*december 6 2002*

[Snagg3r]

wow finally girl your writing more happy poems lately its nice to read things like this
its very good

[Tiffanie]

thanx

[ReeFeRGuRL]

good job gurly. Thas another wicked poem!! :yes: your so talented!!!

[Tiffanie]

thanx reefer i always look forward to reading what you think about my poems...i wrote 3 in a row last night...they are all on here so you can check em out if ya want

[De-Generate]

First time I've been on the forums, and I thought that was pretty good. You're quite talented.

[Tiffanie]

thanx :)

[De-Generate]

;) Thats ok. When you gunna be posting anymore?

[Tiffanie]

whenever i write em
there are many on here from me.
check em out

[Dryve Thru Romance]

that was very cool!

[Tiffanie]

thanx grrl

[Dryve Thru Romance]

ur welcome