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vatjui
12-07-2002, 02:03 PM
Kay guys, this is my most recent poem. I named the girl that makes who I love Jayn. Kinda like someone's D.N.A. Jayn's glare is a term I use for when she looks at me in a way that tortures me. but glare doesn't really mean look evily...just read.

It breaks my will, it shatters my emotions. It pierces my thoughts, it sees my soul. It currupts my mind, it takes control. It attacks my spirit, it spins the wheel. It destroys my body, it defeats my life. It has found me, it will find you. It taunts the lost souls and takes them back. It chews away all I stand for, it fights my war. It rings the bell, it sets the toll. It lives with me, it dies with me. It is my future, it is my past. It rides the nightmare, it wakes the beast. It shakes the earth, it lights the sky. It breaks my hardened wall, it obliterates my hardened heart. For all falls to Jayn's Glare!

Tiffanie
12-07-2002, 02:04 PM
oh wow thats really great

vatjui
12-08-2002, 01:12 AM
ha!

Tiffanie
12-08-2002, 01:22 AM
no really it is...i like it alot

Snagg3r
12-08-2002, 01:24 AM
i like it to
it makes me think which i dont do alot

Tiffanie
12-08-2002, 01:28 AM
ya same here

JasoN
12-08-2002, 01:31 AM
i think without thinking. lol. in other words i juss do whatever and worry about the consequences later :yes:

Tiffanie
12-08-2002, 02:05 AM
:)

ReeFeRGuRL
12-08-2002, 02:24 AM
good job! :D

MarieLove
12-08-2002, 10:53 AM
very good vatjui!

vatjui
12-08-2002, 01:27 PM
well thank you for your positive replies. Funny how just a single person looking at you can change your entire world. ah well...

Tiffanie
12-08-2002, 02:26 PM
wow nice words there ^

vatjui
12-09-2002, 05:21 AM
what?

Tiffanie
12-09-2002, 05:34 AM
well thank you for your positive replies. Funny how just a single person looking at you can change your entire world. ah well...

I like that^

vatjui
12-09-2002, 10:00 AM
oh............kay......