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Tiffanie
12-08-2002, 11:32 PM
"When Its Over"
take a look around you
face what you've got
tell yourself to never let it go
make it stay there forever
cause you never know just what you've got
until its gone
and when you lose it all
then you'll feel my pain
the pain of not knowing why
the pain that is so unbarable
the pain that cuts me so deep
i lost it all
its gone now
i have nothing left
so what am i still doing here
im here to be in pain
no one seems to care
but thats ok
i'll live this life of pain
then i'll be gone
and when its over i'll know
there was never any thing worth my pain
*december 9 2002*
luckyducky
12-09-2002, 03:14 AM
of course ur poems are always good...geez i wish i could write as good as you..but ya just incase ya wanted to know im going through the same thing you are so just do what i do dont give up even tho i know its hard :)
Tiffanie
12-09-2002, 03:15 AM
well i dont think i'll give up...i mean its been 7 years now and im still here so i think im doing ok...one i will fall but not today
De-Generate
12-09-2002, 03:47 AM
That was quite deep. You're quite a talented poet, keep it up. :)
Tiffanie
12-09-2002, 05:15 AM
thanx alot...i'll keep writing till im dead most likly haha
De-Generate
12-09-2002, 06:21 PM
Keeps me happy. :)
Dryve Thru Romance
12-09-2002, 08:37 PM
that was very good! Keep up the great works!
narrator
12-09-2002, 08:52 PM
Isn't that a SugerRay song? :P
Tiffanie
12-10-2002, 12:50 AM
lol the title of it is ya but not the actual poem
ocean
12-14-2002, 09:18 AM
i truly just relate to all your poems!
it's really good!
Unplanned_Childhood
12-14-2002, 09:24 AM
I cant relate to this at all. Its so confounding. Oh no wait its not
fooeleven
12-14-2002, 10:21 AM
thx again a good poem