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narrator
12-09-2002, 09:35 PM
Here,
Did I say here?
A twinge of base,
Underneath your fear

Brown and yellow
I never knew
Why they always
said, black and blue

It's a scar when you're down
A trophy when you're with your friends
You can't hide forever, you'll eventually be found
But I won't forget her, even though I can see how it never ends

ocean
12-10-2002, 04:04 AM
that's actually pretty good! keep it up!

fooeleven
12-10-2002, 06:46 AM
continues,you have talent