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narrator
12-10-2002, 05:32 PM
I was listening, or at least pretending well enough
He said that things weren't working
He said th things were fine
It was the listening that mattered
It was the lasting that was mine

God pray, to the lesser power
Because its all the same to me
Would those conversations end
But I know nothing is for free

I was listening, or failing to do so
He said to me, I should stop
He told me I should go
It was everything at once
But what did he know

luckyducky
12-11-2002, 01:37 PM
;) thats very good i liked it...and i like ur style of writing it makes u very unique :)

narrator
12-11-2002, 05:18 PM
Everyone always says my style....hmmm

punkLECH
12-11-2002, 06:02 PM
A little abstract (contextually) but very telling.

narrator
12-11-2002, 06:04 PM
I have a poem called contextual Error, hehe

Dryve Thru Romance
12-12-2002, 09:23 PM
very nice work!

Tiffanie
12-12-2002, 09:33 PM
:) awsome like always