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luckyducky
12-11-2002, 01:49 PM
heres a poem i wrote while in english...haha i think all my poems suck and i dont really share them :erm: but ill be nice and share it with yall :P :

you told me it will all be alright,
so i try will all my might,
to look insde my mind,
why was i nevr so kind,
im puting on a front,
life is just to blunt,
my heart still aces,
my head still shakes,
things are starting to seem clear,
im starting not to fear,
im starting to push my anger back,
but yet theres still something i lack,
i think ure doing the same as i am,
but ill be damned,
to ever give up on you,
i dnt want u to go through what i went through,
i wouldnt want to see the new u,
so if one day i happen to be gone,
always remeber our song,
ure the coolest person i know,
and u let that show,
u were never to shy,
or never sly,
things between us will nver die.

PunkStar
12-11-2002, 02:35 PM
Hey luckyducky,

I love the poem, maybe cuz i can relate to it i guess. keep it up g'yal.

Seeeee Yeah!

:D *PunkStar* :D

luckyducky
12-12-2002, 07:07 AM
aww thanks :)

fooeleven
12-12-2002, 08:05 AM
nice

Tiffanie
12-12-2002, 08:30 AM
hey thats awsome...i can totally relat to it to
keep on writing grrl cause ya got talent

luckyducky
12-12-2002, 08:50 AM
aww thanks yall ill post some more tonight when i get more time