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ocean
12-12-2002, 04:13 AM
i wake up to another day, thinking bout my so called life.
trying to picture you, my dad, your other kids your house and your wife,
my so called mother.
why do i even still bother?
it's way to late to even try to figure it out.
anyway, what are all these thought about?
do they have a meaning? are they even going anywhere?
ah, what the hell, yes off course i care!
you don't know me, and you don't want to.
and now what sould i do?
it's been 18 years since the day, that you and mom went away
and left me here alone to stay!
it's just not right but, anyway!
i'm gonna stop this war that i have with myself.
'couse it's time for me to show what if learnd!
and to let you all see....that the girl you never see crying, the girl that you never see at all, that girl is me and i'll stand up tall and face the world and let them see, that what you've done is in the past for me!

*and this i dedicate to my so called parents!*

fooeleven
12-12-2002, 04:24 AM
;) ;) ;) ;)

De-Generate
12-12-2002, 04:24 AM
Pretty cool, you kept it flowing. Good job :mrgreen:

ReeFeRGuRL
12-12-2002, 04:26 AM
yeah good flow gurl!!! :D

ocean
12-13-2002, 07:05 AM
aww.....thank you!

Tiffanie
12-13-2002, 07:10 AM
omg i love this poem
you have no idea how well i can relat..if you read my poem called "daddy" then you'll see...how grrl this is an amazing poem i love it so much :)

ocean
12-13-2002, 07:36 AM
i can relate to that really well!
i wrote it about 2 years ago when i decided that i was better of without them! but it's so damn hard! is'nt it?