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narrator
12-13-2002, 06:50 PM
Dreaming of wide slits in my wrists
Another short story with a tragic ending
Not long waiting
From quarter grooves in locks that scream

Did you ever look?
See how it hurts so much
Choking down the embers
Let it calm me down
Understanding a reminder
Of what I’ll never have

Standing so close knowing that it kills me to breathe it in
Two parting depressions, they come down, within
Sometimes I’m not doing any good
I've done nothing but let down

But that’s another story for another time
A broken spirit failed by your design
Hard kisses and lost valentines

Wish me luck
Open that door
Locked ashes and it bleeds more
It’s time,
It’s time to die

Just say you would do the same for me

narrator
12-14-2002, 08:46 AM
I think nobody even likes to read it...or maybe if I was a girl...I wonder what it is...

Snagg3r
12-14-2002, 08:55 AM
its cool the last part is cool

Unplanned_Childhood
12-14-2002, 09:07 AM
Its all fucking shit, a rip off of good hardcore shit

ocean
12-14-2002, 09:07 AM
great poem! really! i like your writings!

fooeleven
12-14-2002, 10:24 AM
continous

Tiffanie
12-14-2002, 11:41 PM
its another totally awsome poem s/t
dammit i wish i could write like you

JasoN
12-15-2002, 01:25 AM
damn this boy s/t is impressing as hell! i love the twisted lyrics man! :yes: