goodbye...

[ocean]

did you ever really care?
where you ever really there?
you said you loved me,
now i know it was'nt true.
saying goodbye is now the only thing that i can do.

it's your fault,
it's a mistake that you made.
this time i'm really not taking the blame.
and oh my god your excuse, ...that was so lame.

your love is what i came here for
now it's not even worth this poem anymore.
so do me a favour and disappear.
so that i know that my field is clear

i've said goodbye and i meant forgood.
i hope this time you understood.
just leave now and don't come back.
there's nothing left here that you can wreck!
*12/13/2002 to Jared*

[fooeleven]

good

[Sypher]

I like that one girly :yes:

[Pinky]

awwww, that was so sad. *hugs ocean* i'm sowwie that happened to you :yes: it made for a good poem though, positive thinking :D keep up the good work!

[Tiffanie]

awww ya thats an awsome poem grrl
you have major talent :)