sad poem

[luckyducky]

one day i wont be here,
i will slowly disappear,
ive fallen into a trance,
take me back give me another chance,
the days go by slow,
with images of u aflow,
youre always in my head,
i feel like im dead,
as i walk toward my death,
i stop in a deep breathe,
i start to shake,
all of this feels fake,
you wouldnt relize i was gone,
i left out dawn,
i wont be coming back,
there seems to be something i lack,
as my feet reach the edge,
i look over the ledge,
images of u flash trough myhead,
my feet feel like lead,
i decide i shoulnt,
or maybe i couldnt,
my foot slips,
i start to bite my lip,
i start to plunge toward my death,
now there is nothing left,
if only he knew,
what i had to go through,
he will probaby be pleased,
or maybe even relieved,
i wont let him take the gun,
he would waste a good life and b done,
i never loved him enuff,
and lots of other stuff,
the day u dont hear from me,
is the day u might wanna run,
i dont want u to find me dead,
my feet lookin like lead,
my body all blue,
wats sad is one day it might come true.

ya i was kinda depressed when i wrote that :no:

[fooeleven]

good
i love the depression felling

[Tiffanie]

i totally know how ya feel grrl
i love this poem as well :)

[luckyducky]

aww thanx i think that was one of my better ones