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Tiffanie
12-15-2002, 02:11 AM
this is like my worst poem ever but i had to write about this

"Poem 4 U"
it finally happened
i left
you seemed so mad
the look in your eyes was frighting
i didnt want to leave you
you know that was the last thing on my mind
but being there was killing me
you saw how sad i always was
when it was time for us to part
you said some mean words
then gave me the biggest hug
i'll miss you more than ne thing in this world
you know its true
i always thought i would never fall
but fall is what i did
i fell in love with you
and there's nothing i would ever change
although we are just friends
i know i'll always love you more than that
your the cutest thing i have ever seen
your tiny little face is so beautiful
this poem is for you
you know who you are
read this and remember me forever
your my one and only love
forever i know i'll feel the same
im never gonna tell you goodbye
i'll keep you with me always
forever there in my heart
*december 14 2002*
luckyducky
12-15-2002, 11:07 AM
aww i liked that one :yes:
Snagg3r
12-15-2002, 11:13 AM
thats was greatt
vatjui
12-15-2002, 12:32 PM
not as good as some others, but still very good
Tiffanie
12-15-2002, 02:13 PM
ya like i said its not really good at all but it was something i had to write about
Unplanned_Childhood
12-15-2002, 02:24 PM
4 in the title, that's not stupid at all
Snagg3r
12-15-2002, 02:26 PM
fuck you
your the stupid fuck
your names wrong to
you were planned you fucking test tube baby
Unplanned_Childhood
12-15-2002, 02:28 PM
I didn't say birth just because I was a planned baby doesn't mean I had my childhood planned, idiot
Tiffanie
12-16-2002, 01:21 AM
hey now boys no fighting common now
MarieLove
12-16-2002, 10:17 AM
all your poems are awesome, trust me grrly
Tiffanie
12-16-2002, 01:17 PM
thanx maire i can always count on your awsome replys :)
Unplanned_Childhood
12-16-2002, 01:19 PM
yeah, she'd say it was great if it was your shopping list, not that it was bad, personally I didn't want to take the time to read it.
Tiffanie
12-16-2002, 01:56 PM
ok then
ocean
12-16-2002, 04:11 PM
great one! did'nt really expect to read anything not good! just keep that pen going...
fooeleven
12-17-2002, 01:00 AM
punkgrrl2002 thx you're the best foe write beautifull poem
Tiffanie
12-17-2002, 02:21 AM
awww thanx :)
im super duper happy ya likes my poems :)