Life

[Tiffanie]

"Life"
Do you ever wonder why
days and nights can go by
and all you seem to do is sit and cry

Does it make you crazy
can you open your eyes and see
that someone you love so tenderly

Does he see you
does he love those little things you do
does he make you smile when your feeling blue

Can you look in a mirror
look at yourself and say "i know her"
love yourself and have no fear

For so long
i never could i thought it was wrong
but now its time for me to be strong

Time to smile
love life without any deniyal
i know now i'll be around awhile
*december 16 2002*

[ocean]

grrl....it's good! as usual!
not as good as some of your others....but i still can realte to it!...

[ocean]

realte=relate!!!

[Tiffanie]

thanx grrl :)

[Pinky]

I still think it kicks ass :yes:
keep up the good work! *thumbs up*

btw, ocean, there is a button called *edit* that you can use to undo typos :D

[luckyducky]

its not bad...they are good as usual..i have never seen a bad poem from u! keep up the good work grrl :P

[Tiffanie]

well thanx grrls...but i still think its crap

[ocean]

where is that edit button! <feeling dumb>!!!