The Second Version Imitation Blues

[Unplanned_Childhood]

Say how many things are there to do that I’ll never be able to do
Is it everything that sometimes seems like your sentiments are schemes
With or without I think I’ll take the next route
I think I’ll try it again and make it what I actually did intend

It doesn’t sound the same, no, when repeating takes and changes
Everything and all the things I thought that leaving arranges
Is it the first time or the last I can’t remember its all true
That these aren’t the same or any different from the other two

Send me to the wall and make me wish that I was done
Help me then I’ll fall and we realize it can’t be undone
Once it’s down it’s down and I can’t change the fact
That it wasn’t the way it was suppose to go there’s still something it lacked

Say when did I begin to change everything I thought
To an imitation of another’s feelings, just something sought
So when did I begin to lose my time to just repeat
What it is or what it was that makes these things deceit

Disadvantage every time I lose my mind
From my vantage I don’t want to change a line

High up and coming down for just another sound
Tied up and left to drown for just another noun
Good for you, I never thought you could pull it off
Good for me, we always thought that I was too soft

Of such a piece of the entire game that I thought we had a chance
To understand the reason why I can’t take another chance
Every time I try again it’s just an imitation of what I love
It sounds so fake, and I can’t begin to leave the lies of what I only wish I thought of

[fooeleven]

i want to vomit ,boi

[Unplanned_Childhood]

The fickles heart is swayed not based on facts but a rising emotion that gives way to blindess. I believe that had someone else posted that you would be saying something different. In fact I know this to be true, your judgement based on prejudice is the exact paradigm of what is wrong with so much of our culture.

[fooeleven]

i vomit now

[Unplanned_Childhood]

Alright, I'd enjoy some constructive criticism if you are going to criticize it. Oh that's right you can barely construct a sentence in english let alone read a fucking poem. Give me a break and get yourself a translater before you hurt yourself fuckface.

[fooeleven]

i don't want to speak with u
you give too hate on this forum boi
if you hate all people please leave this forum

[Sypher]

Originally posted by fooeleven@Dec 16 2002, 11:52 PM
i want to vomit ,boi
:mad: :mad: :mad:
Alright that was just mean. You don't have to like a person but that doesnt give you the right to go out of your way to insult him. He didnt say anything bad here and your going after him. I think you should apologize, because whether or not I like a poem here I don't post to say that it makes me vomit.
And Unplanned should apologize too because even if he shouldn't have said that he still shouldn't have made fun of him back

[narrator]

Yeah that was pretty dick