Warning: i was very mad when i wrote this

[Tiffanie]

"Back The Fuck Off"
So much anger building up inside me
im about ready to break
there's just to much going on
i cant keep up with it all
im being treated as a child
what the fuck is up with that
this fucking life is going down the drain
there's nothing thats gonna stop it
im not even going to try anymore
yeah im giving up
whats it to you
its my life
so stay the fuck away from me
i dont need anyone around me
im fine on my own
so what if i die tomorrow
who really gives a fuck
i personally could care less
why care when no one around me cares
why try to fight
what the fuck am i fighting for
can anyone understand the words that are comming out of my mouth
does anyone really see the hurt and pain i go through everyday
can someone tell me what the fuck im suposed to do
no
i didnt think so
so back off and leave me the fuck alone
im gonne die in peace
i dont want anyone near me
did you hear me
just stay the fuck away
get the fuck out of my face
im leaving now and im not saying goodbye
so just back the fuck off and let me go
*december 17 2002*

[fooeleven]

you not mad punkgrrl2002
excelent continue
cool
a fucking beautifull poem
thx

[Tiffanie]

thanx :)

[Snagg3r]

fuck mee

[hugeavrilfan.com]

ha ha good job

[Tiffanie]

right

[Sypher]

Another sad one, be happy grrl :)

[Snagg3r]

really punk grrl fuck me

[luckyducky]

thats really good..ya i know how ur feeling....ur not alone

[ocean]

....brighter days are ahead of you....
is all that i can say...and i did like the writing! <as usual!>

[Tiffanie]

thanx again ya'll
and snagg ne time :blush:

[The Fallen]

It was good, but again, we come across the constant theme in your writing: Depression.

[Tiffanie]

well i have depression so thats why they are all about it

[Snagg3r]

Originally posted by punkgrrl2002@Dec 18 2002, 10:28 AM
thanx again ya'll
and snagg ne time :blush:
wow thats my first older chick

[Tiffanie]

YAY lol...your so cute snagg

[Danzig]

it would be cooler if you had rymed dork with stork or jeepers with peepers i am a expert on this stuff and i know what makes a block buster poem

[MarieLove]

dudeeeeeeee... gurlie, i dont know what to say... but your poem is so awesome
i really like your writing and keep the good work plz!
i hope you feel better today :yes:

[Tiffanie]

thanx grrl your the best...and im feeling totally fine today so no worries